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Haiku - About the Moon

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/25/2016 12:28:00 AM

Loved this Haiku!

Paul Callus

Date: 3/23/2016 1:04:00 PM

Such a lovely image, Charm...those eyes interacting with the moon, even at a distance! Vacant & glistening eyes reflect sadness and an aching heart....// paul

Tim Smith

Date: 3/21/2016 5:32:00 PM

What a superb haiku Charma...there are so many meanings one can interpret. The true sign of a brilliant write....a favorite

Constance La France

Date: 3/21/2016 2:43:00 PM

Charmaine, oh such a nice haiku, I am loving this 7 ~

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/21/2016 11:34:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful...I just love it. Barbara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/21/2016 11:00:00 AM

lovely 'ku filled with introspection, charms...much enjoyed especially the last line... huggs

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/21/2016 10:57:00 AM

Last night I noticed how the moon shined brightly into my window, this is a beauty of a haiku Charmaine :)