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Haiku - Lucky Escapes - Number Twenty Two

Leveret scurries Trained ears, panoramic sight Saved - by a hare's breath. Easter Bunny blinks Burrows the deep undergrowth Close shave this morning

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/31/2009 1:44:00 PM

LOL gotta love those bunnies!!! Light & Love

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/1/2009 1:32:00 AM

Nice double haiku, Nice muse...Raul

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 3/31/2009 1:03:00 PM

Deirdre, what a magical poem, just loverly! ~Trudy~

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/29/2009 9:16:00 AM

A delightful image in this great double haiku, Deirdre!!! (I'm glad the Easter Bunny got away!)

Sean Kelly

Date: 3/25/2009 3:45:00 AM

A double posting , from the Haiku-Queen ... And a very cleverly linked presentation , it certainly is ....

L'Nass Shango

Date: 3/24/2009 7:18:00 AM

The dramatic ending of the Haiku is under the genius of your mastery. Dear Deirdre, I write your name because it too is poetry. Continue to shine upon your gift. Love

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/24/2009 6:10:00 AM

This is so well written. Great imagery! I have such a vivid picture of this furry little creature in my mind. Thank you for sharing. Smiles from Lolita

Arany P.

Date: 3/24/2009 4:31:00 AM

ooo! this is lovely my friend! you are so brilliant at this!! loved it... the only picture and the title... ~ Arany