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__________________ twilight silhouette- leaning east to catch the sun pink autumn roses ________________________ "A Charles Henderson Contest" Poet~ Rick Parise Seasonal Word ~ Autumn...

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/16/2011 11:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the Strict Haiku contest ^Rick. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/12/2011 5:25:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/12/2011 3:01:00 PM

not sure why this wasn't higher...I'd ask Charles just so we have his perspective..I think it's lovely![The only thing I can think of is the kireji is a bit weak you have the rose in part one and it's shadow in part two?] Congrad's Light & Love

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/11/2011 12:07:00 PM

Congrats, Rick :) I really liked how you contrasted the silhouette with the pink rose here :) Very cool!

Kash Poet

Date: 11/11/2011 11:11:00 AM

This is excellent!Congrats on your win Rick.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/11/2011 6:31:00 AM

Were u in the chat room during our haiku lesson the other night...? This is spectacular...the images of a leaning flower...trying to catch the last glimpses of the sun...you give me goose bumps..congrats Rick, ..Gwendolen

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/11/2011 1:14:00 AM

RICK~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, WITH YOUR entry FOR CHARLES STRICK HAIKU *YIKKEEESS~lesson~ , I COULD NEVER PULL THIS OFF* Have a wonderful VETERANS DAY @;- GOD BLESS,..p.d.