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Haiku # 21 .

Coloured rays from clouds . Spotlights on the horizon . Featuring blue seas .

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/12/2010 10:11:00 PM

Here I am for another round, Sean. I am trying to figure out where I left off. Too bad everyone doesn't do limericks and haiku . I could catch up on all my fav poets' works! OH, and this was neat how you compared it to a scene being spotlighted!

Katherine Stella

Date: 6/13/2008 7:52:00 AM

this would look neat on a plaque with seas as background thanks dear friend for sharing you kick these out pertty fast and you paint a nice picture too keep on sharing enjoying the reads

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 6/13/2008 7:08:00 AM

Mk kind of Haiku, featuring blue seas. I'm waiting for ballads and all I'm getting are haikus, even though they are written well. Have a great one Sean. Vince

Gary Jones

Date: 6/12/2008 8:21:00 AM

Great imagery in this Haiku. Thanks for your remarks. ~Peace~Gar

Fathima Dawood

Date: 6/11/2008 2:20:00 AM

Is it Summer where you are? Lovely Haiku Sean!!! Peace Fathima

Brian Strand

Date: 6/11/2008 12:35:00 AM

Full of colour Sean..likeb these haiku Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Marycile Beer

Date: 6/10/2008 7:33:00 PM

Sean, I do have to admit I am not very knowledgable about the various kinds of poetry. This poem paints a beautiful picture. Good one, God Bless, Cile

Alana Tye

Date: 6/10/2008 6:38:00 AM

I personally, find the forms of few lines are the hardest. You make it look so easy! Great job! :) Cheers, Alana

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 6/10/2008 5:45:00 AM

Haiku number 21, certainly is most well done! What a beautiful image...I was just poem writing in my mind yesterday about the suns rays shining through the trees...nothing is more breathtaking. Awesome! Kristin XO

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/10/2008 5:21:00 AM

Wow. This one makes me wish I was there. Absolutely breathtaking. Nice going Sean. Love, Shar

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 6/10/2008 4:49:00 AM

SEan, you are so masterring this form. The visual clarity within this is great and the form itself is perfect. Michael

Brian Strand

Date: 6/10/2008 2:33:00 AM

Great series Sean.Rgds Brian & thanks for your comments