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As a blooming rose unveils a Winter's first mask Her smile enslaves me

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Date: 4/1/2017 9:31:00 AM
A lovely metaphorical poem, Alvin...congrats on this fine win. // paul
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Alvin Llanos
Date: 4/15/2017 8:49:00 AM
Thank you Paul.
Date: 1/13/2017 8:29:00 PM
Alvin, a picturesque and memorable Haiku. Congratulations on your winning entry. ~Sonia
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Alvin Llanos
Date: 2/7/2017 10:01:00 AM
Thank you Sonia.
Date: 1/13/2017 7:26:00 PM
Beautiful. Congrats on your placement, Alvin.
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Alvin Llanos
Date: 2/7/2017 10:01:00 AM
Thank you Agnes.

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