Haiku 9

dwindling drafts flutter blank pages-- a pen rolls

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Date: 4/23/2013 4:41:00 PM

Nice haiku. Thank you for the placement in your contest. It is much appreciated. love phyl

Date: 4/17/2013 5:11:00 PM

Ooooh, that's nice. Someone's working up a storm. Keep up the great work! Always, Laura

Date: 4/16/2013 10:51:00 AM

Beautiful lines!

Date: 4/15/2013 12:01:00 PM

these days, hammering away at a keyboard...like this one, Heather.

Date: 4/15/2013 11:48:00 AM

Skittles......ha. Good question.

Date: 4/15/2013 7:54:00 AM

Your pen is rolling....that's for sure. My pages aren't so much blank as they are chaotic...ha. Great haiku!................ninja.

Date: 4/15/2013 4:48:00 AM

Heather....you are a storehouse of words and ideas and lovely poems! I can't believe there are too many blank pages! ;)

Date: 4/15/2013 1:46:00 AM

I can relate to this :)..so many dwindlind drafts ending in blank pages..good one

Date: 4/14/2013 9:18:00 PM

Nice one Heather.....:-)

Date: 4/14/2013 7:33:00 PM

love this!! I have stacks of drafts!! :)