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haiku 7 - heat



sizzling is the heat
blistering and sweltering  . . .  
                                                   cold cascading rain


July 16, 2013


Written for the contest, Any Haiku Will Do

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  1. Date: 7/23/2013 6:32:00 PM
    Heat followed by refreshing relief from that heat...Great contrast Constance!...SO glad to see you posting and winning contests again (as usual)...I know you don't like to comment but you and I have been friends for so long and it makes my day when I hear from you...So please Constance please-please-please?? (Pretty please?)

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    Date: 7/23/2013 6:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 7/22/2013 11:42:00 PM
    I love this contrast. It would feel so good on a sizzling hot day. Congrats in the contest, Constance.

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 8:26:00 PM
    fine 'ku, cnstance.. sweet congrats!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 6:44:00 PM
    congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 2:43:00 PM
    Great work that matches some of our weather this year..Congrats on your great win..Sara

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 12:47:00 PM
    Always welcome rain.....congratulations on this win

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 11:38:00 AM
    Constance congratulations on your win.Loved your haiku.

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 6:43:00 AM
    Constance congratulations on your excellent win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 1:10:00 AM
    - A winning haiku, with great quality Constance !! - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 10:54:00 PM
    Can almost feel it. Lovely. Many congrats Constance.

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 8:01:00 PM
    Constance :-) thank you for the wonderful haiku. It's a delight having you support my contest. If you have time please enjoy my latest blog titled "BEYOND SUFFERING" all my winners are announced in order. Goodnight ~ always & forever **LINDA

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 10:02:00 AM
    oh, I'm longing for the rain part! England is sweltering right now (so unusual for us)

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 9:32:00 PM
    Well done! Ill bet it will be a winner..BG

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 8:08:00 PM
    This is a glorious and delightful write my friend! You have encased me into the Haiku by you great wording that you have used! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! What a lovely piece, such a harmonious poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 2:03:00 PM
    A beautiful haiku..So.nice to.find your verses again dear