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Haiku 37

wide and warm, where I lay sleeping beneath blue blanket nebula

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Paul Callus
Date: 2/22/2016 6:49:00 AM
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I see that you divert the short/long/short version of the form into a long/short/long one. Very peaceful ... gazing at a lovely spring sky, I presume. I used to lie down in our corn field and spend ages listening to the rustling corn plants while dreaming my time away! // paul
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/22/2016 2:46:00 PM
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A bit unorthodox of a format, but it felt right when I was writing it :) Sounds like a tranquil time to me ... wasting time, but your soul gets rejuvenated.
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Raul Moreno
Date: 9/14/2013 4:44:00 AM
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And a beautiful blanket it must be, brings a lot to mind from a creative view.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 6/8/2013 12:09:00 PM
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Thanks everyone for the wonderful comments. "Blue blanket nebula" was a euphemism for the blue sky and how cozy it is to sleep beneath it...
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Donna Jones
Date: 6/7/2013 8:35:00 PM
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Very sense filled haiku Timothy....:-)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/7/2013 2:26:00 PM
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this is really good haiku in my opinion as you have captured both sight and feel, two of the senses, beautifully.
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Kim Van Breda
Date: 6/7/2013 8:19:00 AM
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Love the warmth and cool of Blue you have managed to combine in this Haiku.
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Poet Tacito
Date: 6/7/2013 7:56:00 AM
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A constellation's nap. What a vibe!! Love this!
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/7/2013 6:48:00 AM
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Nicely done Timothy,dreamy haiku.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/7/2013 1:29:00 AM
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- Beautiful haiku, Timothy! - Have a great weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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