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Haiku 19

car covered in ice in cold damp morn... birds sing merrily 12/12/12

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Jack Horne

Date: 8/2/2013 12:31:00 AM

yes, lol, the birds are always cheerful, aren't they? enjoyed picturing this, my friend

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/13/2013 6:29:00 AM

Do you enjoy the snow and ice?..Your work reads like it doesn't slow the birds down..It still looks like rain here..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always uplifting..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/23/2012 9:55:00 AM

hey,wish you had some new poems for us here to read today. I will look a while in your oldies but doubt I can find one I have not read already. Yep, sure is nice when snow GOES AWAY

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/23/2012 6:33:00 AM

Good haiku, Phyllis!!! A little Christmas visit to you. <3 Hope your Christmas will be peaceful and beautiful!! Sending you a big, warm Christmas hug !!! - MERRY CHRISTMAS - // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/21/2012 6:13:00 PM

I still love this one and hoping to see another by Xmas time!! Luv ya, Andrea

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/15/2012 8:19:00 AM

can relate to this Phyllis, yes and the birds also,, happened to me just this morning... your poem speaks volumes.. just love this.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/14/2012 9:25:00 AM

Hope they have their little booties on Lol xx

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/14/2012 8:56:00 AM

Were in the fifties.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/13/2012 10:50:00 PM

I love the contrast in this haiku. Just wonderful, phyllis!!! and thanks for reading several of my poems today. I'm waiting for you to post a BUNCH. Luv ya, Andrea

Rollo West

Date: 12/12/2012 5:21:00 PM

Great Haiku Phyllis, great omagery. Rollo

Cindy Cayton

Date: 12/12/2012 4:33:00 PM

nice poem, makes me a bit chilled.... been fortunate with the weather.