Haiku 19

car covered in ice
in cold damp morn...
birds sing merrily

12/12/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 8/2/2013 12:31:00 AM
yes, lol, the birds are always cheerful, aren't they? enjoyed picturing this, my friend
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Date: 1/13/2013 6:29:00 AM
Do you enjoy the snow and ice?..Your work reads like it doesn't slow the birds down..It still looks like rain here..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always uplifting..Sara
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Date: 12/23/2012 9:55:00 AM
hey,wish you had some new poems for us here to read today. I will look a while in your oldies but doubt I can find one I have not read already. Yep, sure is nice when snow GOES AWAY
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Date: 12/23/2012 6:33:00 AM
Good haiku, Phyllis!!! A little Christmas visit to you. <3 Hope your Christmas will be peaceful and beautiful!! Sending you a big, warm Christmas hug !!! - MERRY CHRISTMAS - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/21/2012 6:13:00 PM
I still love this one and hoping to see another by Xmas time!! Luv ya, Andrea
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Date: 12/15/2012 8:19:00 AM
can relate to this Phyllis, yes and the birds also,, happened to me just this morning... your poem speaks volumes.. just love this.
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Date: 12/14/2012 9:25:00 AM
Hope they have their little booties on Lol xx
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Date: 12/13/2012 10:50:00 PM
I love the contrast in this haiku. Just wonderful, phyllis!!! and thanks for reading several of my poems today. I'm waiting for you to post a BUNCH. Luv ya, Andrea
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Date: 12/12/2012 5:21:00 PM
Great Haiku Phyllis, great omagery. Rollo
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Date: 12/12/2012 4:33:00 PM
nice poem, makes me a bit chilled.... been fortunate with the weather.
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