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haiku 14

a falcon soars
surveying his prey...
field mouse runs for cover

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  1. Date: 10/18/2012 10:54:00 AM
    Wonder who won? Did the Falcon go away hungry or did the mouse give his all?...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Been awhile since I saw you on here..Sara

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 2:48:00 PM
    Yep, this is one easily brought to mind and pictured, Phyllis. well done. hey it could even be a scary ku!!!

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 2:19:00 PM
    Like your haiku 14 < > Well done Phyllis - Wishing you a lovely weekend! -oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 1:11:00 PM
    ‡ I Love Precious Little Micies, Dear Beautiful Phyllis. Haha, I Would Run Too If I Saw A Falcon Surveying My Hair ? Don't Wish To Become Part Of The Baby Falcons Bedding. Lovely. Love, Rachel ‡