Haiku 12-5-2016

HAIKU 12/5/2016 One cold blue rose shivering on frozen ground Autumn’s fading scent John G. Lawless 12/5/2016

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Deborah Burch

Date: 12/5/2016 4:34:00 PM

Well done ,John! Very befitting!! I like its visual and allegorical stimulation. Big Hugggs. Cap'n Deb

John Lawless
Date: 12/8/2016 10:10:00 PM

Thanks for stopping to read and comment Deb

Chris Green

Date: 12/5/2016 2:40:00 PM

This was beautiful, a little sad but wonderful in the fact that traces of autumn remain to remind us that the faint hint of beauty is only a sign of what is to come once winter comes to a close.

John Lawless
Date: 12/8/2016 10:09:00 PM

thanks Chris, always appreciate your insight and input.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/5/2016 11:37:00 AM

very beautiful haiku John:-) hugs jan xx

John Lawless
Date: 12/8/2016 10:09:00 PM

thanks Jan