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Haiku 102 - For Contest

Haiku 102 – for contest rogue waves gaping maw curls about listing vessels swallowing sunlight 2.10/2016 submitted to – Haiku 102 – Poetry Contest sponsor – Nathan D.

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Steve Grammatico
Date: 2/19/2016 6:04:00 AM
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I like all the placements, John, but I would have ranked this effort higher. Congrats.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/18/2016 7:41:00 PM
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this is amazing. Congrats for the win.
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/17/2016 1:34:00 PM
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John,congratulations on your win!!!! Hugs Eve
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/17/2016 7:35:00 AM
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John, congratulations on your excellent win, for your outstanding Haiku! Sandra
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/17/2016 1:48:00 AM
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Congratulations for win with this excellent haiku. A 7
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 2/16/2016 10:51:00 PM
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Congrats on ur great win with this awesome haiku John.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/16/2016 7:01:00 PM
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Haven't read this one yet, but the third line is really impact-ful and imaginative. Not a good haiku to read to those that have a fear of the ocean!
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/16/2016 3:23:00 PM
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I REALLY loved this one John congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Paul Callus
Date: 2/16/2016 1:22:00 PM
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This is a very good take on this theme, John, especially that expressive end line! Congrats on your worthy win. // paul
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 2/16/2016 12:55:00 PM
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Congrats John, I like this...BG
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Date: 2/16/2016 12:32:00 PM
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Love the last light, John..., Congratulations in Nate's "Haiku 102" contest. LINDA
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Nathan D.
Date: 2/16/2016 12:00:00 PM
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Thanks Nate'
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/10/2016 5:21:00 PM
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ohhh, awesome last line in this one!
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John Lawless
Date: 2/11/2016 8:10:00 PM
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Thanks again Andrea for stopping by.
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/10/2016 2:25:00 PM
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great hauku John good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 2/11/2016 8:09:00 PM
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Thanks for stopping by to comment Jan
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/10/2016 1:25:00 PM
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- Beautiful haiku, John - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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John Lawless
Date: 2/11/2016 8:08:00 PM
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Thanks for checking in Anne Lise, appreciate you taking the time to read and comment

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