Haiku 06

wedding cake filled with fruits and nuts welcome family

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 4/22/2012 5:53:00 AM

The first thing I got was the family were part of the fruit and nuts! What a laugh today Phil, I think you probably infer that too! :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/21/2012 5:59:00 PM

ha ha....I just bought 2 birthday cakes yesterday... and one was fruity... love your haiku... it has an mmmmmmimage...pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2012 11:37:00 PM

SO Sweet, Phyllis. Were you also making a joke about crazy families? We have an expression here about California being the land of "fruits and nuts" and I am curious if that expression is what you meant here in this haiku. Well, in any event, it's a GREAT haiku. Luv, Andrea

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 4/18/2012 11:21:00 AM

I meant that some are sweet like fruit but some are crazy kinda nutty. All in all a good bunch. back in Saskatoon and hit freezing rain part of the way and is supposed to snow on thur when i head homne

Charles Henderson

Date: 4/16/2012 9:57:00 PM

I'm glad you said the cake and not the "party".

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 4/16/2012 6:20:00 PM

Well written ..