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Had I the Movements of the Inward Crane

Had I the movements of the inward crane, That darts in rhythm between the lunar tangle: My patience would go amiss For such ascension bound to the solar rays. And the earthly shores That utter contempt and fold back the might Would hear the quiet, sweet inhale Before they crumble away at the song of the flight. I will rest myself by the ocean And know the lulled lapping of water, That is ever present in my ear; Comes from the force of two majestic wings spreading breath. Or the leaves that sway about my feet, Are the feathers that come blissfully to greet. Shined energy, vivid, radiant sky Let your embrace bring forward this light. For we still stilt as pained as statues When you are yet to extend your arms And soar above this stage Into the ethereal sight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/23/2013 4:48:00 PM
Very nice
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Date: 8/23/2013 6:40:00 AM
Yet another truly talented individual; this must be the haven where all the good poets gather. I agree with your other reviewers: well composed and wonderfully expressed sentiments. Thank you for sharing; cool read! :)
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Date: 8/22/2013 11:35:00 AM
A very captivating write and it seems of a beautiful relationship within it's struggles. well done :)
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Aiden Asoll
Date: 8/23/2013 3:54:00 AM
Thankyou! As I say in the previous reply, this poem means a lot to me, so I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 8/21/2013 5:48:00 PM
Aiden, awesome! what an incredible write,the imagery, is so powerful deep nothing yet compares to the inward crane look (UNIQUE) love the way you describe the energy and hope of finding a soaring light. I have to say, I had to read the poem 3 times, somehow I found this poem to be flawless, the emerging, radiant sky, majestic wings, boldness in every line. This poem pins something special, and sad in a way. The last part, breathtaking ... enjoyed~ *LINDA
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Aiden Asoll
Date: 8/22/2013 3:57:00 AM
Hey, Linda thankyou!! This is a poem that means a lot to me, its primarily about someone very close to me really glad you enjoyed it, thankyou

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