H O P E - the Tetractys Style

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~Hope~ (1) (Double Tetractys) Hope Makes us Very strong It helps us dream When we keep love faith hopes sun shines brighter Without love hopes sun doesn't shine, there's nothing You lose your dreams So always Keep your Hopes. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2011 July.14.2016 ~Author's Notes: The " Tetractys " is a poetic form or style invented by Ray Stebbing. ---But I will hope continually and will praise you yet more and more. Psalm 71:14 (ESV )

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/14/2016 3:27:00 PM

- Without hope .... nothing to live for, lovely written Dorian - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/14/2016 9:14:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly, Anne-Lise, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciate it dear friend, Anne:))Thank you for all your kindness.Sending you my love n' prayers always.Take very good care of yourself now.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:))Hugs!D