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Gus the Pup - Funom S Sonnet

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At the end cab of the bus the dog lay it’s paw on top of the pup who was now Gus. Gus was a fuss, he ran and hop on the cop . The cop saw us Can I ask, is he one to stop roll, beg, and sit on my lap cus he has wet! Now who will mop? Oh, Gus, on the net in a fog sad all in a mass. Why a dog? Saw a hog and fell off a log off he ran till he saw mom up hill as he use too as a pup Gus now sup out of the tea cup 4/9/2016
4/9/2016 The Funom's Sonnet consists of 14 lines, each line made up of 7/8 syllabic word count. The rhyme pattern is in this form; a-b-a-b,a-b-a-b,c-c-c,d-d-d.

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Date: 4/10/2016 1:09:00 PM
This is a difficult contest. I liked your poem. The dog in the pic, is it a Bichon Frise? Good luck in the contest.
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/10/2016 5:02:00 PM
I am not sure. I decided to get it out of the contest. I don't think it is what he wants , but thank you. Hugs eve
Date: 4/10/2016 11:28:00 AM
Ooooooh! it's nicely ended. Good luck in the contest. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
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