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The Real Jewel

Our man-made pool, resplendent by the kiss Of sunrays catching ripples in the light, Holds but a minute portion of the bliss Of nature's sea with all its power and might. No ocean's roar or pounding waves are here; No breathing with the rise and fall of tide. However, now, this pool so cool and clear Is all we have to keep us satisfied. Earth life is like the pool—a pseudo sea That shimmers in a tiny shallow shell, While boundless waters of Eternity Contain their treasures in a deeper well. We splash within the sparkle of the pool Yet know it isn't quite the real jewel. Sandra M. Haight ~2nd Place~ Contest: New Frontiers or Greater Consciousness Sponsor: Mystic Rose Judged: 08/30/2015

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Date: 9/4/2015 6:11:00 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on your win.... SKAT
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/9/2015 2:43:00 PM
Thank you so much, Skat! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/1/2015 2:00:00 AM
Wonderful write and a superb win! Big congrats Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/2/2015 8:43:00 PM
Thanks, Dr. Upma! Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/31/2015 5:44:00 PM
Wonderful write, Sandra , a 7 and congratulations on your win. Hugs, Eve
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/2/2015 8:44:00 PM
Hi Eve, thanks for stopping by with your support and congrats! It means so much to me. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/30/2015 12:10:00 PM
It takes insight to see it clearly, but this does it beautifully !! Congratulations Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/2/2015 8:45:00 PM
Your comment means so much to me, Carrie. I appreciate your stopping by with your encouraging comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/30/2015 11:22:00 AM
Yes there is much beyond the wonder of here. Congratulations on your fine win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/2/2015 8:46:00 PM
Thanks, Richard. So pleased your identified with my words, and I appreciate your visit. Sandra
Date: 8/17/2015 11:58:00 AM
The message is clear and truly poetically expressed with conviction gleaned from years of experiences. Emile.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/2/2015 8:47:00 PM
Hi Emile, thank you so much for stopping by and for your lovely comments. Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 8/13/2015 10:57:00 PM
wow, this is really good sonnet writing, Sandra. I take my hat off to you. sure hope this is on the winners' list. I have no clue how to do her contest, but I sure think you pulled it off!!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/2/2015 8:48:00 PM
Hi Andrea, thank you so much for your positive and encouraging words! Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 8/13/2015 7:38:00 AM
Awesome write Sandra! Deep poetry here , love pools much!
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Date: 8/13/2015 12:21:00 AM
This has such deep meaning. Enjoyed the thoughtful read. BG
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/2/2015 8:49:00 PM
Thank you so much, Barbara! I appreciated your visit and nice comment. Sandra
Date: 8/12/2015 10:58:00 PM
Love the pen , imagery of the pool sounds good especially in this hot weather. A 7 Hugs Eve
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