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I wonder helplessly like a gored Ox, My Head so light, like an empty Box, I needed even the slightest protection even if it comes from a pair of socks, but finding help in a foreign place is so unorthodox not until I found your sheltering Hut. Mutualism shared so wonderfully, exciting and comforting like the lilly, Love and Compatibility making each day lively, then I realize "actually!" this place is really a Family. Transmitting the passion to members like an antenna, raising our spirits and touching our hearts like an entertainer, giving Hope and encouragement like my sister, Aiyanna so selfless to ensure it is all about You spreading like an epidemic to affect others too and if you still struggle like I do, it will aid you up the ladder for a breakthrough to the point it may seem not true. Wanna improve on your virtues? It shall making you patient and meek like a fisher blessing your hard work by reaching the top like Usher and even making you a mentor like the real Aiyanna-Anisha. What are you waiting for? no restrictions from the Law Join the family and share in the atmosphere of Love.

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Date: 4/14/2015 11:22:00 AM
Funom, this flowed nicely. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/17/2015 11:46:00 AM
thank you so much Cynthia
Date: 2/14/2014 10:33:00 AM
Family is family and may not always be blood related. excellent write.
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/14/2014 12:22:00 PM
Thanks vince...
Date: 4/6/2013 9:40:00 PM
Funom, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-). Have yourself a good one. Always~ LINDA
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/7/2013 9:20:00 AM
Thanks a lot Poet Destroyer A

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