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Gray At Twenty-One

twenty-first birthday too cool to let friends drive judgment impaired prodigal still lives at home - dad will bail him out GRAY graying through his teens black and white never defined consequence, foreign the judge’s guilty verdict shakes his foundation Philosophical Reason A. Poteet

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Date: 3/14/2014 8:14:00 PM
awesome to see this one again. Giorgio has a link to this poem from his winners' blog, so he really like it too!!
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Date: 3/14/2014 11:34:00 PM
thanks, Andrea.
Date: 3/10/2014 6:00:00 AM
Very Wonderful write. Congrats on the win, reason
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Date: 3/14/2014 11:34:00 PM
thank you, Dr. Ram for your kind remarks.
Date: 3/10/2014 2:11:00 AM
Reason, lovely win. ~ Love ~ SKAT
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Date: 3/9/2014 4:51:00 PM
- A wonderful poem posted for Giorgio A.V. contest - "Impress me with a small poem III" - Congratulations on your win, Reason !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/22/2013 7:23:00 AM
I love it. Many congrats for this great win.
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Date: 5/21/2013 11:07:00 AM
well done!..congrats on your fabulous win!..:) huggs
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Date: 5/21/2013 9:31:00 AM
congrats on your win Reason with this expressive tanka
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Date: 5/21/2013 9:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. An excellent view of the color gray. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/21/2013 1:00:00 AM
wow, your final line is awesome for gray!! thanks for entering my contest. Congrats for this fine poem.
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Date: 5/20/2013 9:06:00 PM
congratulations... Linda
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Date: 5/20/2013 8:17:00 PM
This certainly makes one think. congrats on your win and for picking gray. BG
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