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Graveyard Scene - Six Words

Derelict tombstones lying at death’s door. Contest: Six words Sponsor: John Lawless 02~22~16

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/26/2016 11:55:00 AM

thank you for the nice reply. LINDA

Balveen Cheema

Date: 2/25/2016 10:46:00 AM

A deep write! Congrats on your placement, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/25/2016 12:52:00 PM

Thanks so much Balveen:-) hugs Jan xx

White Sage

Date: 2/25/2016 7:36:00 AM

that's a great write with just six words...congrats

Jan Allison
Date: 2/25/2016 12:52:00 PM

Thanks so much White Sage:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/25/2016 1:27:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome win Jan.. powerful six words.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/25/2016 3:38:00 AM

Thanks so much for dropping by I do appreciate your support Dr Sharma:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 2/24/2016 2:43:00 PM

Powerful line Jan...Congrats on your win

Jan Allison
Date: 2/24/2016 3:05:00 PM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/24/2016 1:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! Excellent!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/24/2016 1:59:00 PM

Many thanks Susan:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/24/2016 12:35:00 PM

Jan, congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 2/24/2016 2:00:00 PM

Many thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 2/24/2016 11:27:00 AM

Jan, such depth and darkness in six words, quite wonderful, dear friend ~

Jan Allison
Date: 2/24/2016 2:00:00 PM

Many thanks Broken Wings:-) hugs Jan xx

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/24/2016 12:54:00 AM

Quite the play on words, Jan. What a turn in mood from your adorable grook I read last time ... perhaps poets are notorious for mood swings ;) In any case, congrats on your placement in the contest! I wrote mine a day too late ... was surprised by how quickly it filled up!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/24/2016 2:02:00 PM

My muse is like a temperamental teenager I never know what she will come out with next - I loved the challenge her and there is still humour here in the end of the poem:-) These contests fill so quickly I am pleased I placed so well:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/23/2016 5:10:00 PM

Jan, Congrats on your "SIX WORD win." LINDA

Jan Allison
Date: 2/24/2016 2:02:00 PM

Many thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2016 4:02:00 PM

congrats, my friend. Clever and funny!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/24/2016 2:02:00 PM

I went for dark yet with some humour here Andrea:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 2/23/2016 12:38:00 PM

Back to congratulate you!!!! Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2016 3:40:00 PM

Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/23/2016 12:31:00 PM

Congrats on your win my lovely friend, bl

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2016 3:40:00 PM

Thanks so much BL:-) hugs Jan xx

Eric Boddie

Date: 2/23/2016 12:27:00 PM

this is so profound and I really like the sound of this gem I just found....jan, the soup is lucky to have you around....;)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2016 3:40:00 PM

Thanks so much Eric:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 2/23/2016 12:11:00 PM

Top marks for these winning six lines, Jan! One of the best I have read so far! Congratulations:) hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2016 12:16:00 PM

I got a 4th place Paul:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrew Crisci

Date: 2/23/2016 12:02:00 PM

Greetings, Jan. Congratulations on your deserving win in John Lawless' contest. Humor is part of life and we also see in your Six Words...they are words of wisdom and awareness coming from your beautiful soul. Thank you for your kind comments. Have a terrific Tuesday. Hugs, Andrew.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2016 12:17:00 PM

Thanks Andrew - there was a degree of humour in the poem but I am not sure everyone saw is a dark but also humourous write:-) hugs Jan xx

Karl Mcdonnell

Date: 2/23/2016 11:07:00 AM

Nice

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2016 12:17:00 PM

Thanks Karl:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 2/22/2016 9:11:00 PM

Great! Good luck in the contest!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2016 12:18:00 PM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2016 4:04:00 PM

I reallyl like this, Jan. Hope you score!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/22/2016 4:23:00 PM

Thanks Andrea - I did actually go for humour here too with the gravestones lying at 'death's door' lol maybe its my British humour and few will 'get' it lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/22/2016 3:45:00 PM

Welcome to the dark side :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/22/2016 3:47:00 PM

ha ha ha I thought if I can't beat you I'd join you lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser

Date: 2/22/2016 3:39:00 PM

Great description in a few words, Jan. Great write :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/22/2016 3:43:00 PM

Thanks so much Laura:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/22/2016 1:57:00 PM

- Deep and well done, Jan ! - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/22/2016 2:00:00 PM

Thanks Anne Lise it is actually quite a challenge i have so many 'one liners' whizzing round my head it is difficult to know which one to choose!:-) hugs Jan xx