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Gratitude, Brown Eyed Jane Returned

Brown eyed Jane returned Yes Brown Eyed Jane she came again, Her teasing sort of caused me pain, So to get her kicks, she came to visit me, always teasing, teasing, teasing, see, i'd feel her up for maybe free, on me weekend planner? I slipped a hand between Janes thighs she had no pants what a surprise, i got a shock 2 seconds later, slap over moosh me bloody face. Slipshod was me manner? So that took the steam from my embrace, and mr floppy lost the place, concentration slap did force, me aggots rose up of course, God suffering Sand goanna .

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Date: 10/28/2011 4:29:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 10/27/2011 1:24:00 PM
Congrats DON on an exciting and excellent win with this awesome poetry for the contest ..xoxo..
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Date: 10/27/2011 12:19:00 PM
Good on ya, Mate. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 10/27/2011 5:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nancy's "Gratitude" contest Don. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/26/2011 6:27:00 PM
Edginess, irreverence but not really, in-your-faceness and then some, all part of the soup that nourishes deeply, thanks SO MUCH Don Johnson~N
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Date: 10/26/2011 9:51:00 PM
On ya Nancy of the Jones, brown eyed Jane run off alone, the mental constipation...
Date: 6/16/2011 3:11:00 AM
To funny, enjoyed this excellent read. I will be thinking about this one all day. http://www.amazon.com/dp/B0052U4O5U
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