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Goodbye, My Lingering Past

Why should this rash lingering memory, of my painful past without real treasure, buffet my soul and remove harmony, of many hours of wonderful pleasure. Me think I must let go of that dark past, that linger on in my mind's window pane. Never to let that forbidden thought last, a second moment more in my pious lane. My lingering past, I now fare thee well. for I have opened a lovely chapter, full of happy story to now tell, of sweet memories that I remember. Now, goodbye lingering straying passion. I now have the purest of pious passion. My first sonnet if it passes all the tests of a real sonnet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/5/2012 7:27:00 AM
Wonderful write! Me thinks you give good advice and are wise saying goodbye to your lingering past. Hugs
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Date: 12/3/2012 8:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in Harry's "Goodbye" contest Modupe. I am sorry it is late. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/29/2012 5:54:00 PM
Hi, Modupe. Some good rhyming lines were in your first sonnet. So nice to see you try a sonnet. BIG congrats on Harry's winners list.
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Date: 11/27/2012 2:42:00 PM
Wonderful write,Modupe...Congrats on your win...Ogbiyan ju jare...Keep it up..kudos to you,my sister...
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Date: 11/27/2012 4:00:00 AM
congrats Modupe for your 6th place winner in my goodbye sonnet contest...
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Date: 11/27/2012 1:28:00 AM
Congratulations Modupe, on your wonderful sonnet xx
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Date: 11/26/2012 9:22:00 PM
Modupe, congratulations ;-) In Harry's "goodbye" contest.. Good night~ PD
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Date: 11/26/2012 6:12:00 PM
Great sonnet Modupe...congrats...Seren
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Date: 11/22/2012 7:54:00 AM
Modupe, for a first sonnet, this is really nice and measures up to many others I am seeing in this contest. Love where you took the theme of goodbye, to one of goodbye to your past! awesome interpretation of the theme.
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Date: 11/21/2012 8:16:00 PM
Love your first sonnet Modupe Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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Date: 11/21/2012 5:55:00 AM
I loved your Poem, easily felt and has good images! Keep it up, Omneya
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