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going going, hopefully, gone

I want to move out of this state,
seeing palm trees makes me feel great,
blue aqua water,
right outside the door,
this is the new scene.
that i am looking for.
a change of place,
a change for the better,
where the sun shines bright,
much better weather,
people are pleasant,
not nast and rude,
its seems like everyone in mass,
is always in a funky mood,
just me and my dogs,
take to the open road, carrying just a little bit,
not a heavy load,
ive done it here,
again and again,
starting over from scratch,
i need a new page in my life to begin,
im scared, and nervious to start this trip,
and nervious about what lay ahead,
but ive got to get planning, and get a grip,
and find a new homestead.

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  1. Date: 8/11/2011 10:26:00 AM
    Your poetry has amazed me today Susan. Thank you for posting it for us all to read and enjoy. Hoping you have a wonderful inspiration filled day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/10/2011 11:31:00 AM
    Seek your bliss. There is no other reason to be alive.