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They say the sun shines on the skin of a goddess her hair dark filled with flowers and her skin of silk,
When you see her don't let her go she will treat u like a god and run her silk hands against the ruffness of your skin she will show u the right way to enlightenment her eyes golden brown so deep you can get lost she can see right through you and know the depth of your soul she will speak words so smooth softer then the wind 
Skin so smooth the sun follows her every move.

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  1. Date: 7/6/2013 8:30:00 PM
    This was a pretty writing. But, I have to wonder how attractive the "goddess" is on the inside. I'd like to see more of that. Nicely done!

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    Date: 7/6/2013 9:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well if she treats you like a god runs her softness on your roughness and teaches you enlightenment you can already tell she's amazing inside