Goddess

the sight of her is the dawn of my day
the luminous of her presence
hushes me in an awesome way
her voice a golden melody
the sweetest lullaby
the sound of chimes 
in the midst of my mind
a tranquil release and gentile unwind
from the troubles and worries of our time
an angel, a goddess; this thing has my mind
her face constantly before mine
and i surrounded by her mist of inhibition
fall prey to shyness and inequality
but yet i dream
i hope, i fantasize
and in those moments
she's all mine





(inspired by the ten most beautful words of 1976)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 6/8/2009 4:27:00 PM
recomment--nasty yes the fly--but im not and you know my good friend:)--charma
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Date: 4/30/2009 8:21:00 PM
A romantic write with lots of love that splashes on the page! Nicely done!
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Date: 4/28/2009 12:07:00 PM
hmm...um lets see good good yea i give it an A+[im not a teacher]
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Date: 4/25/2009 9:51:00 PM
Again a beautiful romantic at heart. You have a wonderful write and I think I reread this three times. Absolutely awesome. Phyl
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Date: 4/23/2009 5:42:00 AM
John, this is simply breathtaking. Whether imagination or real (seems so real to me) I am blown away here. You are a true romantic and an amazing poet! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/22/2009 5:55:00 PM
didn't come through.
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Date: 4/22/2009 5:04:00 PM
how? where? comments, your blowing me away dude, slow down
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Date: 4/22/2009 4:52:00 PM
did I answer, ?
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Date: 4/22/2009 4:30:00 PM
this is wonderful,i can feel we have a poet in love here;-).it reflects so well in his poetry and his angel,his godess is making him very happy-i love the last verse too ,its profound-nice write,it flows wonderfully-charma
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Date: 4/22/2009 4:26:00 PM
what soup mail
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Date: 4/22/2009 4:14:00 PM
Hey John, I don't get what 1976 has to do with anything. hey man, I used to write poems, I always threw them away though, sounded too corny. I'm from the hicksticks of Hey never heard of it county. Thanks for lettin me yank your chain
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