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God In Heaven, Hear My Cry

These are the moments That grip my heart with an iron fist That shoot icy fire into my veins The things that take the feathering fear In the back of my mind And twist them through my being These are the moments When the shroud of dread that envelops me Threatens to consume and suffocate And nothing...no, nothing can be done But fall to my knees And pray

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Dimestore Shoes

Date: 1/6/2010 9:57:00 PM

Your an inspiration to us,, your words envelop us with kindness.. thanks for your support and for all your poetry! I feel the feathering fear too closely of late. This poem attracts me on a surreal emotional level. it is a comfort to know others share it too, though not something one would wish they ever would. I am left wonder why. ps: posted something, please read it when you can.. God's Peace

Dean Masciarelli

Date: 10/12/2009 9:33:00 AM

Good morning Donna this is an outstanding example of what good poetry is all about because your emotions and your feelings are conveyed in such a way that it takes us the readers on our own journeys that we have taken through our own experiences when all we can do is bow our heads down and pray that tomorrow will be much brighter then it was today. Please read a poem of mine called(Some day God will fill a cup full of your tears)Feel free to stop by anytime, Dean

Shiki Remindio

Date: 4/30/2009 11:25:00 PM

Let us pray, and forget all the sorrows that we face. Thank you. ~Shiki

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 3/18/2009 10:51:00 AM

Donna, prayer should be a part of our life. Through prayers we could communicate with God and tell Him all our worries and pains that we couldn't tell to anybody. This is an inspiring one. I like it. Ernilando

Brandee Augustus

Date: 2/16/2009 1:05:00 PM

So true! Very good.

Date: 2/16/2009 12:27:00 PM

So much truth in your words. The vivid imagery works well to forward the emotion. Good job! Keep on writing! Karen

Gregory Golden

Date: 2/16/2009 4:03:00 AM

Its nice to have a little talk with God and He shows us that He really cares. I truly like the feel of this poem. It touches me. Poem possesses honesty, clarity and sincerity. These qualities must flow through a poet's veins

Leander Darwin

Date: 2/15/2009 4:19:00 PM

Wow. Such beautiful truth and conviction. Powerful write. Thankyou for your comments on "Alone and Alive" and "Freedom From A Mask", much appreciated! Leander

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 2/15/2009 1:20:00 PM

nice donna, really nice wow

John Rhinem

Date: 2/15/2009 12:29:00 AM

Smile~So Very Beautiful!!!~"Hello Precious & Blessed Donna Golden & All Your Loves!!!"~First, I sincerely loved Your comment upon Little Drummer Boy~for it showed a Faith just as this write does~and what a true beauty this is always to behold!!!~You speak so clearly, and so convictingly, and so sincerely!!!~I believe that it shall be a joy and a blessing, for many to behold Your words througb time!!!~"Warmth & Blessings Always To You & All You Love, Always, John!":)

Brian Strand

Date: 2/14/2009 11:57:00 PM

Excellent poetry here Donna.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/14/2009 2:39:00 PM

Someimtes I ask the same Donna, nice poem by the way and I hope you have a Happy Valentine's Day...Raul

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 2/14/2009 1:52:00 PM

Yes I know those feelings well expressed, I hope God sees you through! Peace Kindly Laura :)

Jason Stehlik

Date: 2/14/2009 1:03:00 PM

in those moments God does hear our prayers...very powerful.

James Faulkner

Date: 2/14/2009 12:28:00 PM

such strong words. love this write- love and peace: james

Ronald Bingham

Date: 2/14/2009 11:34:00 AM

This is a very powerful poem, with such a sense of urgency. Hope all is alright and if not at least you are on the right track, Blessings, Ron

Christopher Higgins

Date: 2/14/2009 11:17:00 AM

The voice in this poem speaks with so much hurt..icy fire into veins..putting ice and fire together loved it..suffocate.. strong imagery..I love his piece..hope this heart will be healed.