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God- My Saviour

all alone i lay with the darkness crawling over me like a broken winged bird i lay there thinking of my plight i plead for mercy but no one seems to hear fresh blood oozed out of my wounds with pain and fear i cried but no one seemed to care wish i had never taken this route never thought things will go so worse i plead again help me........ not even a shadow to help me out n den a small breeze brushed past my hair caressing my face reminding me of god a small petal fell on my wounds jz like a kiss from god it soothed my pain i see god there i will get over this pain and fear i have seen god my master, my saviour

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Date: 10/9/2014 1:50:00 AM
Very well written
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Date: 10/7/2014 11:26:00 AM
Reshmi, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 9/30/2014 8:53:00 AM
Reshmi, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/30/2014 4:24:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Reshmi- I choose your first sad but, very well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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