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God - Haiku

God – Haiku omnipresent light fills in darkness, laughs and smiles children follow Him

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Julia Ward

Date: 5/1/2015 10:25:00 AM

The insertion of "laughs" gives your poem an extra boost, leading to the thought of children laughing, even though the main subject matter is God. Julia, :)

Earl Schumacker
Date: 5/1/2015 10:36:00 AM

Hi Julia, Thank you for your insightful observations and comments. I appreciate it. God clearly has a sense of humor. Just look at us. Have a wonderful day. Earl

Earl Schumacker

Date: 4/21/2015 6:41:00 AM

Good morning Darlene, Thank you. Glad you liked it. I hope you have a wonderful day. Take care. Earl

Darlene Gifford

Date: 4/20/2015 10:36:00 PM

I think this is a beautiful poem, Earl, and so inspiring. Jesus loves the little children and in their faces his love is reflected.

Earl Schumacker
Date: 5/1/2015 10:42:00 AM

Hi Darlene, I just discovered today that you most likely never received my original response and thank you regarding this poem, since I sent it to you using the wrong format. I apologize for that. "Thank You!" for your kind words. I am happy that you enjoyed it. Take care. Earl