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God - Are You Mad !

Madness spoken by the mad Craved for king in newest clothes God, god, to speak his name Am I toasted burnt and left ash? Yes! No! No God just man or his apology Muslim, Christian and fool all the same Tempting sustenance eaten with relish Fawning laziness such a comforting crutch A patsy poison Antidote too late! Told what to do - then obey Do what you do then - pray Life looking mainly through narrow slits Commanded manly do come out strong fists

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Date: 3/21/2010 1:13:00 PM
Thanks Doris but no it's manly , females don't generally have strong fists ! A testosteronic moment granted to all ! All the best !
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Date: 3/20/2010 2:47:00 PM
IS THE LAST LINE SUPPOSE TO SAY MANLY OR MAINLY?
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Date: 3/16/2010 3:06:00 PM
sounds like you are struggling,,, good poem,,,,and thank you for your comment to mine Blessings,Jackie,
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Date: 3/16/2010 2:32:00 PM
Great insight, great write, look forward to reading more....Allie
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Date: 3/16/2010 5:28:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Nigel. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/15/2010 2:02:00 AM
I like what you have to say Nigel - You speak the truth in a crazy world - Fab share -:)
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