God

GOD

I praise him
I kneel before him
I lay and pray and go to sleep
Knowing his eyes are upon my dreams
Like incense that runs, through the air
He seems to rule and flow through my night sky
Like a GOD!

He holds my love in his hands
Gave me the will to be strong
He's more than my shelter
He's more than my guided stars at night
He holds me in his fist so tight
Like the sanity, that keeps me together
He's the warmness of the light through the night
With his GODLINESS!! 

In the arms of his temple,
He allows me to sit on the right side of his throne
With his presence by my side, I never feel alone
He healed my sadness with the flow of his veins
He healed my rage, and gave me the gift of serenity
You're my GOD!

No one will never know what I feel for him
All the blessings that I have, 
Came since the day I found him,
Now I have my very own GOD!

by; p.d.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 10/29/2020 10:27:00 PM
Wish it was me......
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Date: 10/3/2020 10:22:00 AM
I hope that this person was truly so wonderful for you, PD (and perhaps still is), but I have found throughout my life that the higher the pedestal the easier it is to fall off.
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Date: 9/30/2016 9:12:00 PM
Just saw you welcoming the new lady Ellyn. That was so sweet of you. You do good when you welcome the newbies here!!
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Date: 2/4/2016 10:47:00 PM
Good GOD... **SKAT**
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Date: 8/6/2014 10:20:00 PM
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE WIN.... ME
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Date: 8/1/2014 10:30:00 AM
Hey, can you talk to your own GOD about me? I seem to have lost mine somewhere! I see the strength you derive from your belief. Good write. I like it.
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Date: 8/1/2014 9:09:00 AM
This is excellent, Linda! It's a great write all through, and I'm touched by "He healed my rage, and gave me the gift of serenity." May YOUR God give you hope and happiness in life. // paul
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Date: 8/1/2014 8:10:00 AM
Hi, my dearest sis! I'm so glad & honored to read this marvelous write of yours once again. A great poem & great testimony on God's unconditional love & omnipresence in our lives. Faving it once again & my hearty congratulations on your great win! Biggest hugs! God will always b with us my dearest sis! He loves u and so I do & d rest of our loved ones, ok. Tytysm again. I'll b back hopefully after my paperworks/homework tonight. God bless! Many lovely hugs! love u, 4everpoetsis-BFFLeonora
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Date: 8/1/2014 7:51:00 AM
A fine write and a great win ! Big congrats on both my friend!!!
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Date: 8/1/2014 6:00:00 AM
You always rock Linda!!!!! Love, Teddy <3 <3 <3
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Date: 8/1/2014 5:59:00 AM
Congratulations for your beautiful work, and well deserved win! ^_^ <3 Regards, Teddy.
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Date: 8/1/2014 2:09:00 AM
Congratulations PD xx
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Date: 7/31/2014 11:28:00 PM
A big congratulations on your relationship with God and for your win. Love,Joyce
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Date: 7/31/2014 5:15:00 PM
PD, I love that last line as I resigned from the debating society and discovered a personal relationship with such a "god" as this.
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Date: 7/31/2014 1:46:00 PM
What a beautiful piece you have composed Linda..It is a testament of your faith...congrats...Love Always Tim
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Date: 7/31/2014 9:28:00 AM
Tremendous feel of God in this one Linda! U hv found Him in him,, congrats on huge win my friend!
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Date: 7/31/2014 7:36:00 AM
This is terrific!! it's not a mushy kind of love, like you hear that god is the flowers and the heart, you give strength to god, holding you in his fists, like incense in the air, great unique descriptions, Amazingly beautiful. Grats on your win. You rock :) :)
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Date: 7/31/2014 5:32:00 AM
This reads like a Psalm with a little bit of the Song of Solomon thrown in for good measure. A truly fantastic write , PD ! Congrats on the win . Love- Keith
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Date: 11/23/2013 7:47:00 AM
I love this, Linda. Yes, that is how He is to everyone. Love ya. Have an awesome weekend! Get ready for Thanksgiving :).
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Date: 4/16/2013 9:19:00 AM
read this one again and refresh your mind of your belief.
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Date: 10/22/2012 12:00:00 PM
My dear friend and sister, it's always a nice feeling to be in the hands of God. I like this poem of yours. So touching. love/hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 1/19/2012 1:35:00 AM
quite a touching poem young lady, be happy and fulfilled ....
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Date: 11/24/2011 4:32:00 AM
P.D. This was a good choice for me to read today ,as I must be strong right now.My Husband died on Nov.17. Thank you for a poem with so much wisdom.Anne
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Date: 11/11/2011 7:22:00 AM
Just a note , But God Is not something you can own,God for everybody to warship .
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Date: 11/7/2011 7:55:00 AM
just a note,,,,i battle everyday with the things i shouldnt do or say,,,and its a tough way of life so my poems are how i deal with this sad world,,,keeps me going,,sometimes it seems nothing is working,,,and then when i look back he was there with me the whole time,,,thank you for your time reading my poems,,,you guys rock here at the soup......
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