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God, Dreams, My Feelings

I was 15 when I first looked up to the heavens. My mind was in a dazed as I looked up into the sky. I thought about taking a trip to the moon in my mind. Until my Holy Spirit came and changed my mood, I was feeling mellow now but I was still caught up in my dreams. So I closed my eyes and then my soul and mind was traveling back into the heavens where the Lord’s power kept my soul with him. And there he took my empty body or grounded me and there I saw my dreams lay before me. When I saw my future dreams lay before me, I prayed to God and eventually this bird came back to my soul, and helped me dream about a new and improved dreams. I kneeled down and started to pray to my Lord about the choices that I will make When leaving this nasty place. My prayers seemed good and honest but I had a weird feeling that with the sins I have made, it would be best to pray to myself. And keep it hidden, to confide in no one, absolutely no one. While praying and dreaming, I learned to have the last laugh and push pass it, and to be myself, and have an open mind about what I dream. “Dear God. Thank you for helping me to push pass my bad sins like you said I will not look back, I will ask for forgiveness and move on.” I was 15 when I first looked up to the heavens. My mind was dazed into the skies, I thought about taking a trip to the moon with God.

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Date: 4/30/2010 1:09:00 PM
very nice write welcome to poetry soup and have a great weekend faleshia
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Date: 4/30/2010 9:12:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup T J. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/29/2010 8:36:00 PM
A fine poem on faith
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