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Ghosts

The face at the window, the feeling of dread as I tread to the door, the mysterious welcome, a touch on my shoulder, a cough down the hall, a shadowy figure in Civil War dress looking oddly like me, blowing his bugle then vanishing into the dark. I am back at Appomattox, my comrades around me lying dead or dying. In front of a looking glass feeling transparent, we stare in the mirror, there's no image, no image at all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/29/2012 7:03:00 PM
I love this Keith, I see them, shadows, voices, touches ;} About two weeks ago I woke up smelling my mom's coffee, I called out Mom, like she would answer ;} I have no coffee in my house.
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Date: 10/27/2012 1:40:00 PM
Not a subject that I am fond off especially if you can hear these ghooly creatures. ha ha. love phyl
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Date: 10/21/2012 7:17:00 PM
Ghosts = creepy nightmares. Wrong time of night to read this! :)
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Date: 10/21/2012 8:32:00 AM
Dear Keith, You stopped me cold with these lines. a cough down the hall. To relate a tragedy is one thing, but to feel it and live it (or die it as the case may be) in poetry is overwhelming. Chilling. love, Kathy
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Date: 10/20/2012 6:29:00 PM
great write Keith
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Date: 10/19/2012 9:28:00 PM
kEITH, LOVE YOUR POEM... ...PD
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Date: 10/19/2012 2:14:00 PM
Hi Keith; This is a nice poem about ghosts. It has been said that we can not see the ghosts in the mirror. Thanks a lot for this poem. lucilla
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Date: 10/19/2012 11:48:00 AM
What a creepy image you paint here Kieth, I love it! As you probably know I'm the Halloween guru around here and I try and see the Halloween writes, and this one is a good one my friend! I really enjoyed this delightful display of ghosts and their aparitions! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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