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Ghost - Unchained Passion

pottery wheel spun clay covered her face and hands – his passion aroused Righteous Brothers hit Unchained Melody playing – spell of passion cast true love never chained romance fills the silver screen -- setting hearts afire *Entry for Andrea and Nikko’s “Movie Scene” senryu

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2012 10:03:00 PM

YOu chose a great movie and scene, CArolyn. Congrats in my contest co judged with Nikko. WE loved this.

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/7/2012 2:15:00 PM

: ) I have watched this so many times, I've lost count, Carolyn..your senryu captured the essence of the movie, the scene with "Unchained melody" ! Congratulations on your fine win in the contest! Hurry back..have missed you. Love, Annalise

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/7/2012 12:21:00 PM

Ah you sure captured that passionate scene here-- yes it wouldn't have been complete without the Righteous Brothers! Wonderful way to capture this memorable scene in the movie, Carolyn :) Congrats on your win!! :D

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/7/2012 12:12:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/7/2012 3:32:00 AM

Golly, Carolyn. You probably could have written 10 plus great senryu about the hot scenes from this movie...you wrote a show stopper. I enjoyed the jog down memory lane. Hope your New Year is off to a bright start. Gwendolen.

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/1/2012 12:16:00 PM

I just love the scene you chose from the movie Carolyn.. Happy New Year to you hun :) love Wilma

Jack Horne

Date: 12/31/2011 2:30:00 PM

Yes, I remember this scene - you've captured it beautifully

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/31/2011 7:10:00 AM

This movie scene is one of the best known today, and it is fitting that one of the best poets, writes an eulogy for it. harry

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/29/2011 1:39:00 AM

Funny Carolyn, how different origins/cirumstances; can cause a quite an unexpected result in the entertainment field.. (worth consideration ) and all the best with this...

John Freeman

Date: 12/28/2011 3:15:00 PM

Neat love scenes Carolyn, Smile. Agape, Moses

Tony Lane

Date: 12/28/2011 1:43:00 PM

But what was that thing she was making out of clay?

Daver Austin

Date: 12/28/2011 1:15:00 PM

I wonder if Jennifer Lopez would do a scene with clay covering her face and hands. Just the sight of Jennifer sets my pacemaker off like Santa Anita, but with the clay thing? VAROOOOM! You have stimulated my creative nature with your fine writing, dear Carolyn. Love, daver

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/28/2011 1:05:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one..Don't know what movie though..A little dense I guess..I remember the song "Unchained Melody"..Yes, some religious faith say that the grave is the end..That thought makes me shutter for what would we live for without an afterlife..Sara

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/28/2011 12:48:00 PM

You already knew mine would be 1940's , right? lol...I KNEW YOU WOULD CHOSE A MOVIE LIKE THIS!! Wow...I got you pegged, gal! ha ha. This is a triple dipple senryu and one hot cuppa tea!! Love it! What a gas! You chose one of the most sensual movies of all time--epic! Penguins with small BOOOTIES can't fly!! u had me at ICE!!...I was dyin' laughing! Luv ya, Gwendolen

Jancarl Campi

Date: 12/28/2011 11:41:00 AM

Great poem and a fantastic movie. "Ghost" what a passionate love. Nice seeing some of your work Carolyn. Happy New Year! Wow! 2012, I can hardly believe it.The older I get the faster the years go. Take care, Jancarl

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/28/2011 11:32:00 AM

"Ghost", I really enjoyed this movie! You made a great description of the passionate pottery scene!! Wonderful imagery, Carolyn! Fantastic Work!!