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He hugs me gently, and it feels so good that at that moment, I'm ready to die. For; only selfless love feels like love should, and it makes me want to break down and cry. He gazes up into my eyes and smiles as he sees the happy tears start to swell. And I forget about life's hurts and trials, for when I'm safe in his arms, all is well. He makes me feel loved and completely whole, for together, we are a perfect fit. And we share one composite heart and soul that's indestructible and can't be split. Two inseparable haves are now one, and our journey together has begun. (Sonnet) 4/14/2015

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Date: 2/25/2018 3:07:00 PM
Lovely poem, Emile. Love the second line "in that moment I'm ready to die" shows the depth of love - beautifully expressed epitome. A love that soothes "life's hurts and trials".
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Date: 2/25/2018 5:33:00 PM
Thanks Line, all of your comments are appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/21/2015 10:48:00 AM
whoaaa....wonderful take on the contest.. Congrats Emile.. :) god bless ~7~
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Date: 11/21/2015 11:29:00 AM
Thank Remnants, your support is appreciated. Emile.
Date: 11/21/2015 10:21:00 AM
Nice and romantic. Congrats Emile to win first place. Best wishes Anisha D
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Date: 11/21/2015 11:28:00 AM
Thank you Anisha, your support is appreciated. Emile.
Date: 11/21/2015 8:01:00 AM
This is sweet, and beautiful...congrats on your win!
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Date: 11/21/2015 8:44:00 AM
Thank you Edward, your support is appreciated. Emile.
Date: 11/21/2015 7:21:00 AM
Beautifully stated Emile.
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Date: 11/21/2015 8:43:00 AM
Thank you so much James, your encouraging words are welcome. Emile.
Date: 11/21/2015 12:46:00 AM
Emile excellent win !! It was my favorite!
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Date: 11/21/2015 8:43:00 AM
Thanks Michael, your encouraging words are most appreciated. Emile.
Date: 11/21/2015 12:22:00 AM
Hi Emile,, Congratulations on your awesome number one placement. ThanXs for supporting my contest. <3 Love SKAT
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Date: 11/21/2015 8:41:00 AM
Thank you so much SKAT the opportunity, your encouraging words are inspiring. Emile.
Date: 11/1/2015 11:24:00 PM
Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Emile!
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Date: 11/2/2015 7:29:00 AM
Thanks Upma, your encouraging support is most valued. Emile.
Date: 11/1/2015 4:07:00 PM
Heartfelt and beautiful, Emile. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win. Sandra
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Date: 11/1/2015 4:13:00 PM
Thanks again Sandra, your support is greatly appreciated. Emile.
Date: 11/1/2015 2:39:00 AM
Emile,Congratulations on your 1st place win. :-)Alexis
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Date: 11/1/2015 7:49:00 AM
Thanks Alexis, your support is greatly appreciated. Emile.
Date: 11/1/2015 1:30:00 AM
Congrats Emile! A loving sonnet on appreciation and reciprocating to love! Balveen
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Date: 11/1/2015 7:51:00 AM
Thanks Balveen, your support is greatly appreciated. Emile.
Date: 10/31/2015 10:23:00 PM
Wonderful entry for the contest.. Well deserved win, absolutely beautiful.. :) -LU Be blessed
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Date: 11/1/2015 7:53:00 AM
Thanks so much Laura, your encouragement and support is greatly appreciated. Emile.
Date: 10/31/2015 8:14:00 PM
Emile wonderful poem. love this. It is so heartfelt. a deserving win my friend. Being really busy lately working full time and playing in a classic Rock N Roll band. Stay well my friend this is one of my favorites.
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Date: 11/1/2015 7:55:00 AM
Thanks Michael, your friendship and encouraging comments are most welcome, good luck with your music, I'm sure you sound great. Emile.
Date: 4/16/2015 6:59:00 PM
Excellent pen Emile! I truly enjoyed your excellent sonnet, dear friend.Thank you for visiting my page.A 7 from me!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light! God bless you! :) D."
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Date: 4/17/2015 8:12:00 AM
Thanks Dorian, your continued support is appreciated. Emile.
Date: 4/15/2015 8:49:00 AM
:)! romantic and sweet.. :)!! lovely Emile.. I wish to experience this soon if my man has such treatment with me.. :)//olive eloisa
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Date: 4/15/2015 5:53:00 PM
Thanks so much Olive, I wish you the best and hope you find true love waiting for you. Emile.
Date: 4/15/2015 6:47:00 AM
truly beautiful pen emile bless you wishing you a lovely week pal
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Date: 4/15/2015 7:22:00 AM
Thanks so much Liam, your friendly words are heart warming. Emile.
Date: 4/14/2015 9:10:00 PM
What a beautiful sonnet this is! Poetry at its finest.#7.
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Date: 4/15/2015 7:24:00 AM
Thank you so much Nandita, your encouraging words are inspiring. Emile.

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