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Gentle and Happy

Down snuggle under Down soft gentle Gentle snores Gentle caressing Caressing my thoughts Caressing my skin Skin soft Skin like velvet Velvet cloak Velvet to wrap Wrap around Wrap yourself in In dreams In sunny thoughts Thoughts of love Thoughts of loving Loving wanting Loving needing Needing you Needing your body Body close Body as one One mind One in harmony Harmony as in tune Harmony as one One being One as joined Joined by heart Joined as twins Twins as one Twins one mind Mind of memories Mind remembers Remembers kisses Remembers heaven Heaven on earth Heaven sent Sent into rhapsodies Sent to the moon Moon shines Moon shines with With twinkling star With star watching Gazing at moon Gazing becomes happy Happy almost dusk Happy nearly dawn Dawn ... Dusk ... Contest by Debbie Guzzi Contest name. Down under Penned 29/08/2015 By Seren Roberts

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Date: 9/12/2015 8:22:00 AM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/8/2015 8:42:00 PM
Seren, congrats on your win with this dreamy, romantic blitz! Love, Kim
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/8/2015 9:34:00 PM
Thank you Kim, not used this form before.i enjoyed it....Seren
Date: 9/8/2015 9:00:00 AM
Seren, Congratulations on your -Down Under- win. Love .....SKAT**
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Date: 9/8/2015 9:35:00 PM
Thank you Skat....seren
Date: 9/7/2015 6:52:00 PM
Fabulous write, Seren, congratulations on your win a 7! Hugs Eve
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/7/2015 9:05:00 PM
Eve thank you so much, after the initial omg I enjoyed this form....Seren
Date: 9/7/2015 4:06:00 PM
A fine sensual verse, I hope you enjoyed the process. Congrad's! Light & Love
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Date: 9/7/2015 4:48:00 PM
Hi Debbie,I think I did.lol wasnt sure I had done it right. Thanks for placing me.....Seren...
Date: 9/7/2015 1:08:00 PM
An awesome write. I still have to get the hang of this style.
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Date: 9/7/2015 3:37:00 PM
Me too I was lucky.....Seren
Date: 9/6/2015 11:36:00 PM
Superb winning write Seren, big congrats!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/7/2015 3:35:00 PM
Thanks Dr Upma I appreciate you comments ....Seren
Date: 9/1/2015 8:42:00 AM
Excellent. Lovely write. Enjoyed reading it. TFS
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/7/2015 3:36:00 PM
Thx Ravi glad you enjoyed.....Seren
Date: 8/31/2015 2:02:00 PM
wow, sheer delight, seren... lovely piece.. huggs
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/6/2015 9:05:00 AM
From you Nette it is praise indeed, thank you....Seren

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