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Cherry Tomatoes

It is late morning, and a string of washing is waving on the line Clothes look like colorful flags flapping in the wind. I'm watching her, as she captures and pokes a stray wisp of grey hair, back into the braid she wears, knotted into a bun on the back of her head... She's wearing those sturdy black shoes, those opaque cotton hose and a corn-flowered blue dress of calico She has a smile of satisfaction, and her eyes are as clear and blue as the sky Summer sun is shining ...she walks to the garden, and begins to pick vegetables Her flowered apron is folded into a hammock and is overflowing with cucumbers, tomatoes, and bell peppers... Quickly, into her mouth, she pops a warm cherry tomato.... straight from the vine,....a juicy, red marble She picks two or three, along with a weed, while I sit like a drone in, that old tire throne that dangles and sways from the old Cottonwood tree... "Try these, dear"...she says..."They are delicious....sweet as sugar on a Sunday morn" She holds one out to me, and I taste this juicy morsel of goodness... Before she goes inside, she clutches the apron closed ... then with one hand reaches down and gently pets the old hound, who sleeps in the shade and somehow, the vision of her begins to fade, As hard as I try.....it is fading....and then I hear the sound of an airplane overhead... Suddenly, I am standing in my garden, and the cherry tomatoes in my pail are shining in the sun and juice is lingering in my mouth....sweet as sugar on a Sunday morn.... and I feel warm glow of satisfaction under the summer sun _________________________________________________________________

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Date: 12/9/2011 10:17:00 AM
Beautiful, Carrie and much deserving of being in the winners' circle.
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Date: 12/9/2011 7:46:00 AM
Congrats on your win in th Dream a little dream contest!!!! Great work Carrie... luv xox Michael
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Date: 12/9/2011 5:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win in Tracie's "Dream" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/9/2011 2:35:00 AM
Lovely, congratulations x
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Date: 12/9/2011 12:24:00 AM
I agree with Bob Carrie, this felt like a warm hug to me, congrats on your 7th place win xx
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Date: 12/8/2011 10:41:00 PM
This one is as comfortable as an soft robe. Really enjoyed reading this Carrie. Congratulations
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Date: 7/12/2010 10:18:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Angels Among Us". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2010 2:25:00 AM
A well deserved win. Very intriguing write. Congrats.
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Date: 7/10/2010 6:24:00 PM
Congrats on stealing my 1st place spot Carrie...lol..just kidding...an awsome write indeed. I've honored you among many as well. Check it out if ya want to. Best Wishes Always, Kidster - I've Made Love To (?) Here @ the Soup > http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=236655
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Date: 7/10/2010 8:12:00 AM
chills, still two minutes after reading. congrats and so well deserved. too beautiful. incredible poetess you are. hugs, shar xoxo
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Date: 7/10/2010 6:32:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your first place wn with this outstanding piece for Angels Among Us contest.. enjoy a well deserved victory ..with luv..
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Date: 7/10/2010 1:25:00 AM
Great write, Carrie and congrats on your win!
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Date: 7/9/2010 6:18:00 PM
Congratulations, Carrie, on first place, in my contest, Angels Among Us, with this beautiful poem. If you could soup mail me, your address, I will forward your Certificate of Achievement... Love Constance
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Date: 7/3/2010 1:37:00 PM
Such a lovely poem, Carrie! Perhaps this "angel" is your mother or grandmother? I really like the way the angel's character comes to life as she goes through the garden, shares some of the tomatoes with you and then pets the hound. Quite a delightful image! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/2/2010 9:45:00 PM
... at a dexterous height, a sharp, witty, observant intellect, at the service of a descripto-narrative array of nature & her very inmates ... L-a-g-o-s whispers, 'Carry-go'!!! Canny
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