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Game of Beast and Man

……….... On act two, my handkerchief dropped down on my weakening feet, escaping the wipe of tears from my sullen lids: by this time children too young to make their own milk burst into deafening cheers shouting for more blood… the matador in graceful sways of his cape derailed his prey again---a wounded bull pierced by stabs on the neck and shoulders: but this was not enough. Wincing in pain, the sword dug into its lungs as the shock in my throat creaked like dried sandpaper raking with the quivering thud of an exhausted animal roused into a public arena for a play, disturbed, confused… and the fiesta music played with such passion of slaughter until the stag rolled on the floor, crowned with spears on the head, and finally unto its heart. I could not breathe in the sound of victory swaggering women’s ruffled skirts and male hats flipping off on an aching sky. Before the dying beast was dragged back into its den and the bullfighter bowed to the echoing adulation of the crowd smelling of death and glory, I run out, dazed---finding solace from shelling some pesetas for a laced fan so delicate in the elegance of its design--- my cheeks wanting to catch a wisp of fresh air. The game of bull and man tasted sour on my pagan tongue. ……….. * my first bullfight experience in Madrid, Spain For Joe Flach’s Contest Contest by nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/30/2013 12:31:00 AM
Nette. are you still around. HURRY and see , my contest is back up.
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Date: 3/22/2012 7:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joe's "The Contest Contest" Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2012 7:49:00 AM
What an experience! I hate 'hunting??' man against animals seems so cruel unless one must to eat! Congrad's on your win!
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Date: 3/21/2012 1:22:00 PM
I agree....I would have been rooting for the bull.....the whole idea leaves indeed a sour taste! Wonderful writing, as always...you are a mistress of the poem!!
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Date: 3/21/2012 7:54:00 AM
Nette congrats on your win, great poem, horrible so called sport..David
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Date: 3/21/2012 2:11:00 AM
Wow a magnificent win nette well done r xx
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Date: 3/20/2012 8:04:00 PM
way to go, nette. I just saw this one the other day and thought it deserved a big win!
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Date: 3/20/2012 6:54:00 PM
You brought this experience to life and I am so glad I wasn't there. I can't believe that poeple still like to see an animal killed for fun. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/18/2012 8:59:00 PM
wow, this is SO GOOD. I did not have this reaction. I don't recall I even saw the bull get killed when I went and I was so far up in those bleachers. I love the reference to the delicate laced fan, they are so beautiful in Spain and that line about "an aching sky" wonderful.
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Date: 3/18/2012 8:47:00 PM
Bull and bear baiting along with cockfighting are illegal in most parts of the world. However, this brutal "sport" which is the epitome of animal cruelty is still around. You have written about it well here.
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Date: 3/18/2012 3:16:00 PM
To see the spectacle is better than the slaughter house. We are all protected from the daily kill which gives us our meat. Culture can leave us uncomfortable, but it is still better to feel than to be blind to the daily survival which leads the human race to kill. A Poem to make us all think. excellent.
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Date: 3/18/2012 1:24:00 PM
Very emotive and expressive work..Sad that the bull had to die..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Good luck in the contest...Reads like a winner to me.Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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Date: 3/18/2012 12:14:00 PM
yes the bullfights are intense and sad .. but exciting as well .. a tremendous write Nette luv.. a true contest of wills for both bull and matador.. so enjoyed.. going to read soup mail now ..good luck in Joe's contest.. luv..
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Date: 3/18/2012 11:12:00 AM
Beautifully written poem on that sport.Actually I hate that sport.Best wishes....hmmm...still awake..?? it is 1 am there.....
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 3/18/2012 11:20:00 AM
don't like it at all as well, kashi.. i had to get out of the coliseum in madrid, yipers!
Date: 3/18/2012 10:28:00 AM
Smile ˜ With Eyes Gazing Through The Light Of Holy Spirit * I Find This Poems Parallel Unto Another Moment In Time & Yet An Entirely Different Setting & Scenario ˜ My Dear Precious & Beautiful Nette ˜ This Would Be Around Two Thousand Years Ago ˜ The Bull In This Case Would Have Been * CHRIST JESUS * The Spectators Would Have Been The Fallon Angels & Perhaps Others As They? Maybe Not All Although? ˜ I Guess I Can Leave Rest Of This Reflection Unto Everone Elses Imaginations?! ˜ Smile, "Long Live THE KING!" * My Love to You & 'Happy Easter,' John!:) ˜
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