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Gambling Footle

lose bet in debt

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/23/2011 2:36:00 PM

Good advice in four words..Congrats..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/23/2011 5:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's Footle contest Jack. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2011 9:31:00 PM

Very nicely won. Congratulations, jack

John Freeman

Date: 5/22/2011 9:24:00 AM

A pleasure Friend! To see your success near the top, Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses

Kash Poet

Date: 5/22/2011 8:23:00 AM

Wonderful.Congrats jack on your win..

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/21/2011 5:02:00 PM

okay been there done that, Jack. But you win on this footle. That's one gamle that paid off for you. Congratulations to you

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/21/2011 10:54:00 AM

Delighted to see you in the winners' circle, Jack. Congratulations, my friend! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/21/2011 10:19:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of brian strand, jack

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/21/2011 9:13:00 AM

Congrats Jack on your big win in Brian's contest with this cool write my friend.. I did the opposite of this one and we both won..so cool..enjoy luv..

James Foulk

Date: 5/19/2011 7:35:00 PM

I like this one, well written i think so anyway. and so true you lose a bet you are in debt. thank you for commenting on Tender Love

Dinda Minardi

Date: 5/19/2011 8:26:00 AM

very nice!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/18/2011 3:18:00 PM

Oh yes, that's a great footle, Jack. Isn't this a fun form? Look how much you said in four syllables. A winner for sure! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2011 11:38:00 AM

I am spending my morning reading wonderful poetry and enjoying it so much. I am so impressed with the poems I have read so far this morning. I am happy yours was among them Jack. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors always. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/18/2011 10:24:00 AM

Hi Jack, you need two lines, each having two syllables, for a footle. The form was introduced to the Soup by Brian Strand. You can add another line to this and enter it. I just posted a footle that might serve as an example. Very simple form and fun to write. Yours could be very witty, as most are intended to be. Love, Carolyn (leaving for the neurologist now)