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Gamblers – Lune for contest lucky charms scattered under chair without milk //visual #7// 8/6/2015

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Date: 8/17/2015 12:40:00 PM

Great lune, John! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Date: 8/16/2015 11:19:00 PM

What a wonderful imagery John! Congrats on big win!

Date: 8/16/2015 8:51:00 PM

Hi John, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Date: 8/16/2015 1:32:00 AM

John, congratulations in Andrea's "Pretty Little Lunes contest" SKAT

John Lawless
Date: 8/16/2015 5:47:00 PM

Thanks SKAT

Date: 8/15/2015 7:38:00 AM

I didn't even know what the image was John - lovely write my congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 8/16/2015 5:59:00 PM

To my knowledge its not a cereal we have - with all that colour and those e numbers I' m glad lol:-) hugs Jan

John Lawless
Date: 8/16/2015 5:46:00 PM

Jan, it looked like Lucky Charms to me....

Date: 8/15/2015 7:22:00 AM

Nicely done! Grats on your win!

John Lawless
Date: 8/15/2015 7:36:00 AM

Thanks Casarah, I could never figure out how the kids could eat that stuff but it is colorful...

Date: 8/15/2015 4:27:00 AM

A most unique take on this visual, John! I like!! Congrats on a merited win. // paul

John Lawless
Date: 8/15/2015 7:35:00 AM

Thanks Paul, I had a little fun with this form

Date: 8/15/2015 1:23:00 AM

It was very interesting how you did the lucky charms! Great way of looking at the picture, John. Congrats in my contest.

John Lawless
Date: 8/15/2015 7:34:00 AM

Very interesting little form ... maybe the lucky charms worked....