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Fully Booked-1

last goodbye to spilling blood colder realms of mangled dead final breath from red river flood piercing cries from wounded screams nightmares paid for, we are wed that tremble hearts in midnight dreams addict's need of words unsaid contest Titles of Novels A Farewell to Arms 7 lines 7 7 8 7 7 8 7 ABACBCB 6/10/16

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2016 5:49:00 PM

glad to finally see this one. It's very good, Frederick. And I take it you are a father, so happy father's day!!! (am I wrong?)

Frederic Parker
Date: 6/19/2016 7:05:00 PM

2 sons 2 grand-daughters

Paul Callus

Date: 6/15/2016 4:33:00 PM

Dark red spills through these lines, Frederic. A very good take on this title, and a worthy winner, too...congratulations! ~ Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2016 3:00:00 PM

A dark one!! I like it, Frederic. BIG congrats for your win.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/14/2016 3:46:00 AM

what a piercing poem which is way out of your comfort zone, frederick...thanks for being part of my contest and big congrats!..huggs

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/10/2016 2:53:00 PM

"piercing cries from wounded screams"...my fav line ...well done Frederic...good luck...^WW^

Jan Allison

Date: 6/10/2016 11:20:00 AM

Dark imagery Frederic - I try not to spill too much blood when I write:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx