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Full Darkness, No Stars

You walk outside and are struck by the velvety blackness you recall with bitterness the night bringing that black buck Yes he wooed her away carried her off in darkness no stars just a pitch blackness in his bower with her lay It was full darkness, no stars my heart filled with bleakness body shaking with coldness trapped inside these steel bars Beware the angel of dark do not approach in blindness take care to see it's grossness be touched not by it's mark

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/3/2014 8:06:00 AM
charged with stark images, shadow.. beautiful!... hugggs
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Date: 4/4/2014 3:01:00 PM
ty Nette hugs
Date: 4/2/2014 10:30:00 PM
KInd of scary one . I LIKES it!!! Great eerie atmosphere you created, Shadow.
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Date: 4/4/2014 3:01:00 PM
ty Andrea hugs
Date: 4/2/2014 9:23:00 AM
I am a fan of Stephen King, the first book I read of his was The Stand. My favorite is the Gunslinger series.
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Date: 4/2/2014 8:49:00 AM
This has an ominous feel.
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Date: 4/2/2014 9:19:00 AM
Hi Rick yes it is based on Stephen King's book of short stories Full Dark, No Stars ty for reading hugs
Date: 4/2/2014 5:57:00 AM
- A truly dark night - mystery and fear felt in the body - Really well written, Shadow - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/2/2014 9:17:00 AM
ty Anne Lise hugs

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