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Fstop. (SNAP!) our moment. our pier. in a split second, a single-slipped ray of animation senses and egresses ambient light into the cauterized bloodstream of two enamored lovers. Fstop. (SNAP!) our reflection. my desire for you. my private folding twice into your extended arms - thrice thinking through the mercurial threads of my theatrical, dramatic effulgence; launching my passion forth - knowing the eagerness, of a woman's innocence, will boomerang like zirconium crystals to caress and invade parched throats. for us to swallow and savor. Fstop. (SNAP!) our morning. our daydreams will shoot the light fantastic like the omnipresent sun. a whispered warmth leaks within my heart - it then secretly spills upon your breasts - it longingly stings, like gilded particles of dazzled mercury; silently burning my candid penance into your wanton wishes - akin to smoldering embers. (my camera clicks) Fstop. (SNAP!) our auroral afternoon. like a clandestine morning blossom; a once removed duo - now ignite Mr. Sunshine's latitudes and longitudes into a partnership of cindered flesh. my sunshine - am i invited with camera down to your expansive arms - your powdered legs - and...? Fstop. (SNAP!) I'm blinded by your prismed stare. Smile, sunshine - beam relucent as I adjust the smothered aperture.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/9/2011 8:23:00 AM
Congratulations John on your poetry being once again featured this week before the final round of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. The best to you in the contest. Carol
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Date: 8/5/2011 4:22:00 PM
Hey John, Congratulations on your fantastic poems making it through to the First Rounds of PS's Intl. Contest! Hope all is well. Love, Annalise
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Date: 8/3/2011 7:07:00 PM
A very creative and captivating write John, congratulations on all three of your poems making the cut and good luck!
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Date: 3/9/2009 1:05:00 PM
wow you hve a very distintive style. I look forward to reading more. I am surprised about a feature? do they choose randomly? I am new, cant you tell? cat
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Date: 3/9/2009 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations with your win with this well crafted piece, John. I love the photo snaps in this! Thank you for your kind words! Love, Robin
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Date: 2/25/2009 8:11:00 PM
egads, [which i (l)earn from you] this is what real writing is supposed to be. Sure thing, this one tops it all. Indeed a shoo-in!
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Date: 2/25/2009 3:33:00 PM
It's hard to talk when you hold that camera. delectable write for the infamous John Heck.-loved it. Encore!!!-Hope you didn't mind my borrowing your name in one of mine. -Always Alexandra
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Date: 2/25/2009 12:06:00 PM
I am not surprised at all here. A most unique and excellent write. Congrats and well done on your win in Christie's contest! Love, Shar
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Date: 2/25/2009 11:32:00 AM
I love this unusual, creative and orginal work, John. A wonderful, and different angle to the contest! ~ Congratulations on an excellent entry! ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/25/2009 8:31:00 AM
Howdy John - Congratulations on placing in Christie's contest - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/25/2009 8:29:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Christie's contest John.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/14/2009 10:49:00 AM
Hi John... great writing.. very original ( love the Fstop ( SNAP ) punctuation... a stroke of genius... thank you John for your comment... good luck with the compo
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Date: 2/9/2009 5:04:00 PM
You have done it again, of course, a winner for sure!!!:) Wow, such an unusual and descriptive and 'out there' piece that you are known for....you always leave me speechless! Best wishes, Sara:)
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Date: 2/7/2009 10:56:00 PM
Nice concept John, taking photo's is a hobby of mine also. I can't live without macro. I have to have those close ups. Great work and best of luck in the contest...Raul
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Date: 2/7/2009 9:54:00 AM
This is an incredible write..wish I had thought of it..lol.very creative my friend..best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 2/7/2009 3:25:00 AM
Amazing interpretation on this contest and sunshine itself - you have captured the soul of sunshine in its dappled flashes, literally, you never cease to amazing me, John, you know this is a winner. :) Love, Kristin
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Date: 2/7/2009 2:52:00 AM
Always , something uniquely different from the pen of Lord Heck ..
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Date: 2/6/2009 11:00:00 PM
John the more I read your poetry the more amazing i find it to be - Just an excellent take with this poem - Enjoyed the light and airy read from opening to closing line - Wonderful Poetry my friend - God Bless, MJ
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