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Fruits of War - Portmanteaus

FRUIT OF WAR - PORTMANTEAUS Brusted gree skirt the terrain -- its fortress now smog of pains. Sprolled brave emoticons flurst floppled by remorse. Alive, lovely floriage. no mercy, at once loafted! Finentual world ethics forgotten clang cries. Blind men sinduced to power: justice then a fadograph. Bescraped kindness ,dusten traits, birthing woes and death. Precious breathing counts one, two. In and out wheezing some help Oozing damage marks hatred Peace start when war ends. (c) Olive ELoisa 10:41pm August 20, 2014 from the list: smog, emoticon from research: brusted - Brown Broken and Rusted gree - any number of green trees sprolled - sped and rolled flurst - flew and burst floppled - fell, flopped and toppled floriage - flowers and foliage loafted - floated and drifted finentual - final and eventual sinduce - sin and seduce fadograph - fade photograph bescrape - escaped and broke dusten -dusty and beaten

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/4/2014 10:16:00 AM

i hate to say i told you so. congratulations on your win.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/4/2014 10:39:00 AM

:) God bless you MAurice.. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/4/2014 6:34:00 AM

Olive, congrats on the fine win

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/4/2014 10:26:00 AM

thanks :)

Paul Callus

Date: 9/3/2014 6:26:00 PM

Well done Olive_eloi! I had missed reading this poem; luckily your merited win brings it to my attention. Congratulations. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/4/2014 10:17:00 AM

thanks much Sara.. :) I appreciate this.. :)God bless. :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/3/2014 12:08:00 PM

Astounding winner..Way to go..Congrats..Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/25/2015 5:47:00 PM

thank you so much Sara.. :)!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 8/22/2014 11:05:00 PM

excellent. just a delight to read. i am a theatre director at heart. writing is so out of my range. hard to control words i drive my work by my passion. as a director though i so appreciate your talent. God Bless and go girl go!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/4/2014 10:13:00 AM

Thanks much Maurice.. :) I appreciate this.. :) GOd bless you too.. :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/22/2014 9:17:00 PM

Oh wow....Debbie is going to love this one...you truly grab this bull by the horns!!Yippee for you!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/22/2014 10:05:00 PM

Thank you Carrie..:) I really appreciate this comment..:) knowing of how graceful are your words too this do encourage me more..:) I tried this as am curious with the words that is classified as PORTMANTEAUS..:) GBU thanks again..:)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/20/2014 10:22:00 AM

I'm not even going to attempt this contest - I only speak English and gibberish LOL Great work good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/22/2014 4:29:00 AM

I was curious with what are PORTMANTEAUS is I'm glad I tried it..:) somehow I have known some coined words which before I used..:) but I wasn't taw are that it's called that way ..:)