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Cold Blue Lips Premiere Contest Winner

The sky is black as liquid ink with not a star, Hushed and silent is the forest this dark night; I walk a snow covered path seeking him, The tangled intertwined branches creaking. Groaning under heavy precious crystal icicles, That dangle suspended like brilliant chandeliers; The harsh, wild wind takes my long raven hair, And my purple gown presses against me. Every night I walk this cold, lonely forest path, I come willingly and without any fear for my soul; Even though I know that he is the undead, His voice, his scent, his beauty devastating. I have no strength to fight the love that I feel, In a distant clearing he stands waiting for me; His dark flowing hair blows wildly in the winter wind, His skin so pale it mingles with the falling snow. I am somehow floating, drifting into his sweet embrace, And his dead, cold blue lips are at last on mine; In a frozen kiss and I am lost in total utter rapture, The wind is swirling and twisting and turning. And I find myself in bed . . . ________________________ May 22, 2014 Poetry/Narrative/Cold Blue Lips Copyright Protected, ID 05-568-308-22 All Rights Reserved, 2014, Constance La France Submitted to Standard Contest 258, sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 05/2014 First Place ______________________________ Submitted to the Premier contest, Best Poems, sponsor, Shadow Hamilton, Second Place ________________________________ Submitted to Best Love Poems, sponsor, Poet Destroyer, Second Place

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Date: 4/5/2020 12:57:00 PM
An exceptional dream, BW. Perhaps not, perhaps that is where he leads and leaves you. Great story telling, mysterious, leaving the reader wanting more.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/5/2020 6:10:00 PM
James, you are finding of my beloved older poem, and I appreciate that so much, and thanks for the exceptional _Constance
Date: 1/6/2017 8:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win, Constance:) this one is sure a beautiful write, I could imagine the scene clearly:) splendidly written:) a 7:)
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Date: 1/6/2017 7:12:00 AM
An eerie love story and a well-deserved win. Congrats.
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Date: 1/5/2017 8:06:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this wonderful poem, Constance.
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Date: 1/5/2017 7:42:00 PM
Hauntingly beautiful poem, Constance. Congrats on your well-deserved top win! Janice
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Date: 7/27/2015 2:08:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning write BW!Medically speaking cold lips can be pale or blue n not red, but vivid imagery n Brilliant work!
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Constance La France
Date: 7/27/2015 11:08:00 AM
Upma, of course medically would be quite different from this undead man in my poem as he is a vampire and vampires always have cold red lips in my poetic writing anyways, others my write it differently, but not my vampires they will always have cold red lips in every write I pen . . .
Date: 7/27/2015 12:01:00 AM
BW, congratulations your win:-)Alexis
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Date: 7/26/2015 4:28:00 PM
BROKEN, Congratulations on Your Best Poem #2 win. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/26/2015 4:06:00 PM
vivid imagery Connie superb congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 7/26/2015 3:58:00 PM
Dropping back again with my congrats - i don't remember the image but I recall the chilling imagery:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/30/2014 2:22:00 PM
Beautiful poem built on vivid imagery! Isn't imagination a great companion!! // paul
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Date: 5/29/2014 3:43:00 PM
just love this one, Constance. Hope you and the kitties are doing well, my friend xx
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Date: 5/27/2014 6:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win!
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Date: 5/27/2014 6:47:00 AM
Well placed win, way to freeze out the competition, well done :)
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Date: 5/27/2014 1:43:00 AM
Beautiful - vivid imagery. Many congrat's on your win. Lainie
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Date: 5/26/2014 9:53:00 PM
BROKEN,, Congratulations, thank you for the support. Enjoy my blog "Four Letter Words." if you like or have the time.. ((THIS IS A SWEET POEM ON LOVE)) Good night.... XOX~ LINDA
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Date: 5/22/2014 11:46:00 PM
wow, this is a very eery one, very romantic but in a way that takes me back to when I was reading of Heathcliff!! I really like it, Constance. So good to see you tonight. I rarely get to see the list of current posts but tonight i took a peek and this one of yours was just about to scroll off!!
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Date: 5/22/2014 5:30:00 PM
wow the imagery in here is superb I love this write and I am sure Linda will too - good luck in the contest hugs Jan xxxx
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