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Frozen In Crystalline- Number- 6

The lake captures winter's rare beauty, before her waters crystallise. Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 11.21.2014 Syllables 9 + 8 8tth

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/30/2014 12:16:00 PM

A lovely winter scene described, Brenda! Congrats to you on an awesome win!! Hugs, Rhonda

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/30/2014 9:55:00 AM

Barbara, what a beautiful piece - you captured the essence in two short lovely lines! Congratulations on your great well-deserved win! Pandita.

Skat A

Date: 11/30/2014 1:56:00 AM

BRENDA, Congratulations with your awesome "Frozen In Crystalline" win. ~SKAT~

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/29/2014 6:26:00 PM

Hi Brenda, congratulations for your win for your lovely crystalline! Hugs, Sandra

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/29/2014 1:26:00 PM

breath taking Brenda congrats on win hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 11/29/2014 12:27:00 PM

I cant believe i missed this little beauty first time - many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/29/2014 11:31:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work..There are some very interesting and descriptive works in the winner's list..A fine group of poets gather at this soup pot..Sara

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 11/29/2014 10:24:00 AM

congratulations Brenda on another fine win ,well done

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/29/2014 9:28:00 AM

So good to see you on the winners list, congratulations.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/29/2014 6:34:00 AM

Ohhh! this is very lovely, Brenda! Missed it before, but luckily found it on the winners' list! I can imagine the reflections, before that natural mirror gives way to ice. Congrats on a deserved win. // paul

Joseph May

Date: 11/29/2014 6:14:00 AM

Wonderful write Brenda...Congrats on your win

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 11/29/2014 1:27:00 AM

Congrats on the win Brenda and happy Weekend...huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2014 1:01:00 AM

a lovely description of picture number six, brenda. congrats in my contest and thanks for your support.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/26/2014 5:02:00 PM

your first line is captivating, i imagine frozen.. :) when elsa succeeddingly turned everything to ice.. :)

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/26/2014 5:31:00 PM

Hahaha, I forgot about that but yes, that's about it.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/25/2014 6:48:00 PM

A fine portrayal of the image (winter's) and check with Andie IF the end words have to rhyme hon. LIght & Love

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/25/2014 10:38:00 PM

Thanks so much Debbie.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/25/2014 4:35:00 AM

love it Brenda gl in contest hugs

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/25/2014 7:24:00 AM

Thanks Shadow.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/24/2014 9:28:00 AM

ohhh,i like the perceived consequence of waters being crystallized,brenda... how unique and vivid!.. huggs

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/24/2014 2:47:00 PM

Thank you Nette

Cherl Dunn

Date: 11/23/2014 9:23:00 PM

Simply beautiful, cheri

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/24/2014 2:47:00 PM

Thanks Cheri

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/23/2014 6:46:00 AM

Beautiful, Brenda. Good luck in the contest.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/24/2014 2:45:00 PM

Thanks Maurice.

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/22/2014 4:20:00 PM

Brenda, A very well-penned write here and a "7" from me. Good Luck in the contest!! I'm sure you'll do very well. Alles Gute!! Gary

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/24/2014 2:45:00 PM

Thank you Gary.

Sandip Goswami

Date: 11/22/2014 1:35:00 PM

Super...Multiple meanings...I love it...Thank you very much...Long live your big heart...

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/22/2014 2:33:00 PM

Thank you so much Sandip

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/22/2014 9:28:00 AM

This is pretty Brenda.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/22/2014 2:31:00 PM

Thanks Richard.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/22/2014 7:58:00 AM

Very descriptive work ..I enjoyed the beauty captured in these few words..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/22/2014 8:16:00 AM

Thanks Sara.

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 11/22/2014 5:40:00 AM

You capitalize on winter's beauty just beyond she turns brutal. But then again, I can visualize the next scene - graceful skaters on the ice. A beautiful crystalline, Brenda, best of luck in the judging.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/22/2014 8:15:00 AM

The skaters would add to the beauty. Thanks Reason.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/22/2014 3:39:00 AM

clever and very beautiful Brenda gl in contest hugs 7

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/22/2014 8:14:00 AM

Thank you Shadow.