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Frozen In Crystalline - 2

FROZEN IN CRYSTALLINE - 2 The icy feather flakes flitter hush-- swirl free to sprawl on midnight mush. ©O.E. Guillermo Sponsor Andrea Dietrich Contest Name Frozen In Crystalline Placed 5th 5:22 pm, November 24, 2014

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/30/2014 6:44:00 PM

A lovely winter scene, Olive! Congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/6/2015 7:38:00 AM

thanks much Rhonda.. :)! hugs too

Skat A

Date: 11/30/2014 1:52:00 AM

OLIVE, Congratulations with your awesome "Frozen In Crystalline" win. ~SKAT~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/6/2015 7:39:00 AM

thanks much Skat.. :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/30/2014 12:37:00 AM

eloi, you thrill me with your flowing words.. ang galeng!..cheers to you for your great win

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/6/2015 7:39:00 AM

thanks much Nette.. :) GAling mo din.. :)!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/29/2014 10:33:00 PM

Wonderful imagery Olive! Congrats on ur awesome win!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/6/2015 7:41:00 AM

thanks much Dr. Upma.. :D

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/29/2014 9:33:00 PM

Congratulations Olive on your win!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/29/2014 1:04:00 PM

wonderful Olive congrats on win hugs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/6/2015 7:40:00 AM

thanks much Shadow.. :)!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/29/2014 12:16:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/29/2014 8:46:00 AM

Nicely done Olive.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/29/2014 10:03:00 PM

thanks much Sir.. :)!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/29/2014 7:09:00 AM

Congrats on your winning entry..There were some very creative works on the list..Such a talented group of writers gathered at this soup pot....Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/6/2015 7:39:00 AM

thanks much Sara.. :) You are talented too.. :D!

Paul Callus

Date: 11/29/2014 5:41:00 AM

Back with merited congratulations, Olive_eloi!! I had no doubt this would be on the winners' list. hugs // paul

Len Gasun

Date: 11/29/2014 1:48:00 AM

I love what you did here my dear friend Olive! Thumbs up and big congratulations on your well-deserved win! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/6/2015 7:37:00 AM

Thanks much Leonora.. :)! I appreciate it. :) God bless you always..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2014 12:43:00 AM

Love the first line's alliteration, dear. great imagery! And congrats to you.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/30/2014 9:06:00 AM

:) thanks much Andrea.. :)!

Paul Callus

Date: 11/26/2014 3:50:00 PM

Hi Olive_eloi! You make these icy flakes sound nice and attractive, mostly through use of alliteration. I like:) hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/26/2014 4:47:00 PM

hahahah Paul.. :) I tried to incorporate as much poetical devices in these two lines.. :O though i hope it's okei.. :) thanks as always.. :) there are sound words, alliteration, metaphor, rhyme.. :O

James Fraser

Date: 11/25/2014 1:55:00 PM

Love when so few words image so much, James :)

James Fraser
Date: 11/26/2014 12:03:00 PM

As is mine Olive, good start if I may say you :):)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/26/2014 8:39:00 AM

:) thanks much this my first try by the way.. :D

Faye Gibson

Date: 11/24/2014 2:55:00 PM

Hi, Olive, Finally getting back to normal...if life ever is normal. lol. I am loving all of these two line beauties. Thanks for asking about me. How are you doing?

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/24/2014 3:12:00 PM

thanks much Faye.. :) YOu crossed my mind.. :)! Im doing alright thank you.. :D

Jan Allison

Date: 11/24/2014 7:58:00 AM

beautiful imagery and I love the alliteration Olive- good luck:-) hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/24/2014 3:10:00 PM

thanks much Jan.,, :D shall write soon.. :D!