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Icy snowflakes from skies escape - frozen frosting forms a white landscape. 11~21~14 Syllable Counter: How many Syllables 8, 9 Contest:- Frozen In Crystalline Sponsor Andrea Dietrich ~awarded 5th place~

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Date: 12/9/2014 2:02:00 PM
I hear your christalyne voice coming from my secret mirror
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Date: 12/9/2014 3:36:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely comment Ovidiu:-) Hugs Jan x
Date: 11/30/2014 7:09:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Jan! Congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/1/2014 1:02:00 AM
Thanks so much Rhonda:-) Hugs Jan x
Date: 11/30/2014 1:52:00 AM
JAN, Congratulations with your awesome "Frozen In Crystalline" win. ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/30/2014 5:26:00 AM
Thanks so much Skat - so lovely to see you back:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/30/2014 12:40:00 AM
you really swayed with this one, jan..cheers to you for your great win
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Date: 11/30/2014 5:25:00 AM
Thanks so much Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/29/2014 10:36:00 PM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Jan!
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Date: 11/30/2014 5:24:00 AM
Thanks so much Dr Sharma :-) Hugs Jan x
Date: 11/29/2014 9:55:00 PM
Congrats Jan on win , just can't escape yet`
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Date: 11/30/2014 5:23:00 AM
Thanks John:-) Hugs Jan x
Date: 11/29/2014 6:06:00 PM
Jan, you created a great image with your words! Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/29/2014 6:09:00 PM
thanks so much Sandra:-) hugs jan x
Date: 11/29/2014 4:04:00 PM
You challenged yourself and did wonderfully Jan, proving how truly talented you are.
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Date: 11/29/2014 5:07:00 PM
aww Brenda you are too kind I simply try my best and hope for the judge likes what i do:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/29/2014 1:05:00 PM
such a beautiful image Jan congrats on win hugs
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Date: 11/29/2014 2:57:00 PM
Thanks so much Shadow:-) Hugs Jan x
Date: 11/29/2014 10:22:00 AM
congratulations Jan on another fine win
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Date: 11/29/2014 2:56:00 PM
Thanks so much Robert:-) Hugs Jan x
Date: 11/29/2014 8:52:00 AM
This captures the mood , congratulations.
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Date: 11/29/2014 2:56:00 PM
Thanks so much Richard:-) Hugs Jan x
Date: 11/29/2014 8:50:00 AM
Good morning Jan, Great job! Very well structured with beautiful imagery. Congratulations. Have a great week end. Earl
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Date: 11/29/2014 2:56:00 PM
Many thanks Earl:-) Hugs Jan x
Date: 11/29/2014 8:45:00 AM
Hey, you did good. Congrats.
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Date: 11/29/2014 2:55:00 PM
Thanks Abdul:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/29/2014 6:56:00 AM
Congrats on your winning entry..There were some very creative works on the list..Very talented group of writers gathered at this soup pot..Thanks for dropping by with congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/29/2014 2:55:00 PM
Thanks Sara:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 11/29/2014 6:15:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Jan
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Date: 11/29/2014 2:55:00 PM
Many thanks Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/29/2014 5:45:00 AM
Hi Jan! I must have missed this frozen gem before; good thing it found a deserved place on the winners' list. Congratulations. #7 Hugs // paul
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Date: 11/29/2014 2:54:00 PM
Many thanks Paul:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/29/2014 1:12:00 AM
Congrats on the win Jan,an irresistable one here...huggs
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Date: 11/29/2014 4:53:00 AM
Many thanks Kayod5:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/29/2014 12:44:00 AM
I sure can't resist anything with frosting, Jan. Very nicely done!! Big congrats in my contest.
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Date: 11/29/2014 4:52:00 AM
Wow 5th Place - thank you so much Andrea for the wonderful placement:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 11/23/2014 1:58:00 PM
Wonderful descriptive work..I enjoyed reading this one..I don't know if the contest has been judged though..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 11/23/2014 2:06:00 PM
I don't think it's closed yet Sara and thanks for the lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan
Date: 11/22/2014 8:05:00 PM
Very nice write Jan...best wishes in the contest
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Date: 11/22/2014 8:06:00 PM
Thanks so much Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/22/2014 3:23:00 PM
Nicely done Jan...it's tough to get that 9 sylable line to flow smoothly
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Date: 11/22/2014 3:25:00 PM
It was a challenge but I always give it my best shot:-) thanks for the lovely comment:-) hugs Jan xxx
Date: 11/22/2014 3:15:00 PM
Replied to your reply below.
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Date: 11/22/2014 3:16:00 PM
Thanks Maurice you are a wonderful friend thank you:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 11/22/2014 5:47:00 AM
I like the thought of escape, Jan. Making the earth look like the sky. Best of luck, Jan.
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Date: 11/22/2014 10:28:00 AM
Thanks so much for your comment Reason:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/22/2014 3:37:00 AM
the image painted is superb as are the words Jan gl in contest hugs
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Date: 11/22/2014 4:53:00 AM
Thanks so much Shadow:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/21/2014 7:04:00 PM
Beautiful Jan. This is really a great one. XOXO
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/21/2014 7:11:00 PM
Thanks Brenda I found it a real challenge:-) Hugs Jan xx
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