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The milky flows coat all around to bring the aria of Yule’s crown. Nov. 26, 2014 6.10am

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/5/2014 12:48:00 AM

Magnificent!

Len Gasun
Date: 12/9/2014 10:05:00 AM

Thank you for the lovely feedback my dear friend M.L and sharing your precious time reading my humble poem. Big hugs and more blessings!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2014 12:02:00 PM

sorry I did not choose this one in my contest, Leonora. I had to come and see which one had been yours. Your syllable count and punctuation were fine and the imagery is pretty. luv, andrea

Len Gasun
Date: 12/4/2014 11:35:00 PM

Oh, it was fine with me my dear friend Andrea. I'll try this form again next time. No problem my dear friend. Sorry, just came now. Just finished our Math-Science Day at school this week and we started the celebration of Father's Day/King's Birthday yest. Today,5th is Majesty's B-day and and at the same time, feast day of Our Church at school. I'm dropping by for a while. See you again soon. Tysm again. Big hug!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/29/2014 11:13:00 AM

- A beautiful poem - Luck in contest !!! - Of course you can "borrow" my Advents poem, my dear friend Leonora - An honor for me - I wish you a beautiful weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun
Date: 12/4/2014 11:29:00 PM

Thank you very much my dear friend Anne Lise. Big hug!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/28/2014 2:35:00 PM

The picture you have created is indeed beautiful.

Len Gasun
Date: 12/4/2014 11:29:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend Richard. Big hug!

Paul Callus

Date: 11/27/2014 3:01:00 PM

That's a lovely white coat you have put on show, Leonora! and that aria will flow across the land with a message of love and peace. hugs // paul

Len Gasun
Date: 12/4/2014 11:28:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend Paul. Big hugs!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/26/2014 4:56:00 PM

beautiful Leonora.. :) like it. :)

Len Gasun
Date: 11/27/2014 6:09:00 AM

Thank you for your very encouraging comment my dear friend Olive. Big hugs!

John Lawless

Date: 11/25/2014 6:01:00 PM

I like it.....the music of the spheres as a crown....

Len Gasun
Date: 11/27/2014 6:10:00 AM

I'm glad to know that you like it my dear friend John. Thank you so much for sharing some of your precious time to read this experimental poem of mine.