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From Mud, To Flow

Surely, not every word from these lines of mine, Have filled your very soul with the strongest sensations The very sensations that stirs the lip to quiver, The back to shiver, and the eyes to glitter, No, these words move many souls, Though none like yours, none like yours… You have felt nothing from these bleeding words, Felt everything from the outside world, In your sphere of existence, I crawl into the crevices, My poetry running cold like my thickening blood On the sidelines, the gutter water reaching the mud Like a pure little stream down a mountain, In the speed of many a forgotten fountain, These words flow right on by, Out of the ground, straight up to the sky, Into little shadows from the corner of your eye They are not meant to stick, For even the mud that once grew thick, Is watered down from on high, Inspired by muses on their shackled way to die Surely, not every word from these lines, Have touched your very core, Not one little word, not one of my worlds… What if I moved you just once again, As my love refuses to grow thin… I reach you….evidently too late Nothing can take you from this maddening state Patience merits death, As words merit power In this gutter, I never knew the strength from filth Could take me to the top of the mountain That continuous flow… That connected souls could only live to know…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/18/2015 7:06:00 PM
But it only takes a word my dear to shake me to the core. And the word is love. And I love you and your poetry! So don't turn to mud! ~Kilmer
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 6/18/2015 11:56:00 PM
Aww..thank you so much! I love you too dear! Your kindness always uplifts me...:} ~Laura
Date: 6/17/2015 8:57:00 AM
Like the ripples from a stone dropped in a pond, these words will wash upon every shore.
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Date: 6/1/2015 11:33:00 PM
wow, are we twins? cant be, you are as beautiful as this poem! But the words do resonate!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 6/3/2015 5:31:00 AM
Arthur...you're so sweet...: ) ~Laura
Date: 6/1/2015 11:40:00 AM
laura, you paint a canvas of love with colorful shades... how lovely!.. huggs
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 6/3/2015 5:32:00 AM
Thanks Nette! Means a lot! ALways Laura
Date: 6/1/2015 9:14:00 AM
Sad and very deep meanderings of your soul, dearest Laura! I am sad with you! Perhaps your happiness is just around the next corner... I wish it so! Total love and my sweetest wishes for you, my dearest Laura! xxxx
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 6/3/2015 5:33:00 AM
Thanks dear Jack! I'm in a CRAZY funk! Your words are encouraging and warm me.... ~Laura
Date: 5/31/2015 6:14:00 PM
Words carry weight and are not easily forgotten or dismissed when they fester in mind and soul. Emile.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 5/31/2015 11:48:00 PM
Thanks Emile...( : I always treasure your words, whether you're commenting or writing.. ~Laura
Date: 5/31/2015 11:51:00 AM
We may try and try, but somehow can't seem to make what seems so sensible to us come to be. That is such a terrible and hurtful reality. Yet when it is accepted as it appears you may have, then you are ready for life. I have often found that these things appear to be solved, but then somehow return to be thought about from time to time. It has come to be my health meter.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 6/3/2015 5:34:00 AM
<3!!! Don't worry, things are looking up my friend! ~Laura
Date: 5/31/2015 11:47:00 AM
The hurt that is expressed here is (may I say) large. (I hesitate to use that word--as it was the source of trouble for Vicomte de Valvert in Cyrano. The ensuing scene is one of my favorites of all time in poetry. I suspect you may know it). In any case, the words that flow from you are absorbed into my veins. I sincerely hope that you will find the "solution" you are looking for. You comments to me are like precious drops of water. What you are dealing with is not easy at all.
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