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From Illusion To Reality-H

She was walking on the footpath uneven, The tiles, at places, jagged and broken Making the pedestrians walk with care Stuffed in her head a question not fair. Meandering not to knock a sleeping beggar With a battered bowl, a skeleton road keeper, Was he dead or alive? she could not guess, And she? Being alive meant not feeling helpless. Her husband, pot-bellied, balding bully, a bull Bulling like a bullfrog walking ahead in blue Halting, looking back to measure the gap, The gap would never close in to good shape. She thought of their congenial intimacy Seven years back, love affair, pregnancy. They entered a shop to buy the grocery. She saw a kid’s picture on a pad of nappy. Death of their son, mockery of her love, The unfaithfulness of her idiotic cove. The shopkeeper’s son was on the phone: “Is there any point to carry it further on?” “I will be going to USA for three years at least Want to be free and have fun, can’t commit.” Her heart went on the other side of the phone Her inner voice spoke to her in different tone. Outside the moon shimmered on a clear summer Her eyes shone with a clear determined glimmer ====================================== Honorable Mention For the contest : Free style - Syed Amaan Ahmad

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Date: 11/12/2013 9:43:00 PM
Dr. Ram these words pull at the readers heartstrings and takes them into the life of this person. Sad and emotional. Nice job
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Date: 10/4/2010 4:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Ram in Syed Amaan Ahmad's contest "Free Style". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/3/2010 4:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta. I found the list on p. 16. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/1/2010 6:59:00 PM
Good luck in this contest and congratulations on your winning write in Deborah's contest!! I tried to comment on the write but there was no CAPTCHA box and there isn't on several of your writes .... hmmmmm ... thought maybe you didn't want any comments ... anyway, keep up the great writes and have a safe 4th!
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Date: 6/30/2010 12:05:00 PM
A lovely moving poem !
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Date: 6/30/2010 11:26:00 AM
moving words,, truly enjoyed have a nice day,..p..d
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Date: 6/30/2010 10:22:00 AM
Good luck on the contest,dr Ram!Great entry! Emily
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Date: 6/30/2010 9:16:00 AM
Great Write!
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Date: 6/30/2010 8:30:00 AM
This is very touching and made me feel sad, great poetry
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Date: 6/30/2010 7:24:00 AM
This is very good. You take me into her life - the life of so many people.
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Date: 6/30/2010 5:37:00 AM
Great story that you have told..It is very descriptive and expressive of another lifestyle in another country but not so far away for some of us who understand the woman in the write..Many right here in US endure the same only on a more subtle level..Keep the creative pen flowing..Good luck in the contest..Sara
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